Constance La France Poet Free verse

Blue Embrace

I am falling into fathomless sea waves 
enfolding me in a blue embrace
where swirls of ultra-marine
turquoise and cobalt crash and surge
and I am lost, so lost in the roar 
then, suddenly I find myself
looking into your deep blue eyes
feeling like I have journeyed the seven seas
and have now found my safe harbor

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November 2, 2021


Poetry/Free Verse/Blue Embrace
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1403-241-02
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, Blue
sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 1/06/2021


Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (Dec 28)
sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 12/28/2021

First Place

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Connie Marcum Wong December 28, 2021 at 12:56 PM This is lovely Constance. I especially love the way you ended this. Congratulations on your first placement in Brian’s contest. I wish you the happiest of New Years. Blessings xxoo Constance La France December 28, 2021 at 3:30 PM Connie, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for the congratulations in Brian's contest, Happy New Year ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Laura Leiser November 4, 2021 at 5:42 PM Beautiful expressions of blue, Constance. Such an array of facets and emotions shine forth! :) Constance La France November 5, 2021 at 7:58 AM Laura, thanks for the compliment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

M. L. Kiser November 3, 2021 at 3:26 PM Beautiful thoughts, penned with feeling. Constance La France November 4, 2021 at 8:45 AM ML, thanks for the visit and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Eve Roper November 2, 2021 at 6:31 PM Wow! A lot of feeling an impact in this poem. Great right, Constance. Good luck in the contest. Hugs eve Constance La France November 3, 2021 at 8:16 AM Eve, thanks for the compliment and encouragement, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance

Gordon Mcconnell November 2, 2021 at 2:20 PM Such beautiful imagery with a great line of thought too. Really enjoyed this! Blessings, Constance Constance La France November 3, 2021 at 8:16 AM Gordon, thank you so much for the compliment and the visit ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Sam Kauffman November 2, 2021 at 1:18 PM So lovely and romantic Constance. Best wishes for the contest! Constance La France November 2, 2021 at 2:09 PM Sam, thanks for the compliment and encouragement ~ love and serenity _Constance