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Blue Embrace

I am falling into fathomless sea waves enfolding me in a blue embrace where swirls of ultra-marine turquoise and cobalt crash and surge and I am lost, so lost in the roar then, suddenly I find myself looking into your deep blue eyes feeling like I have journeyed the seven seas and have now found my safe harbor _____________________ November 2, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/Blue Embrace Copyright Protected, ID 11-1403-241-02 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Blue sponsor, Mystic Rose Rose, Judged 1/06/2021 Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (Dec 28) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 12/28/2021 First Place

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/28/2021 12:56:00 PM

This is lovely Constance. I especially love the way you ended this. Congratulations on your first placement in Brian’s contest. I wish you the happiest of New Years. Blessings xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2021 3:30:00 PM

Connie, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for the congratulations in Brian's contest, Happy New Year ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/4/2021 5:42:00 PM

Beautiful expressions of blue, Constance. Such an array of facets and emotions shine forth! :)

Constance La France
Date: 11/5/2021 7:58:00 AM

Laura, thanks for the compliment, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/3/2021 3:26:00 PM

Beautiful thoughts, penned with feeling.

Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2021 8:45:00 AM

ML, thanks for the visit and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 11/2/2021 6:31:00 PM

Wow! A lot of feeling an impact in this poem. Great right, Constance. Good luck in the contest. Hugs eve

Constance La France
Date: 11/3/2021 8:16:00 AM

Eve, thanks for the compliment and encouragement, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/2/2021 2:20:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery with a great line of thought too. Really enjoyed this! Blessings, Constance

Constance La France
Date: 11/3/2021 8:16:00 AM

Gordon, thank you so much for the compliment and the visit ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/2/2021 1:18:00 PM

So lovely and romantic Constance. Best wishes for the contest!

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2021 2:09:00 PM

Sam, thanks for the compliment and encouragement ~ love and serenity _Constance