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Blue Dinosaur

Little friend of mine,                                                                                                                                                                 we have such a wonderful time.
Everyone is so afraid of you,                                                                                                                                  even if you are just made of blue.
We play all day and night,                                                                                                                                      then we can sleep so tight.
In our dreams we play until we awake,                                                                                                                       then we go running down and play at the lake.
Before you know it the day is done,                                                                                                                             then there is no more fun.
Now it is time to sleep again,
so mommy can write our thoughts with a pen.


Honorable Mention  July 2019 DINOSAUR(S) - FOR CHILDREN
Contest Judged:  7/5/2019 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Bryan Norton Date: 5/18/2020 8:37:00 PM OK. Are you for real? That's like 3 for 3. That's the best Dino poem ever. I felt like a child again, and what better compliment can you give a person. You really should be published! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/19/2020 12:01:00 PM Thank You, for your very kind words. Glad you like this. It was fun to write. Hope you will enjoy reading more as I write them. Have a wonderful day..............

Euni- verse Date: 7/17/2019 12:43:00 AM What a fun poem! I also found the formatting amusing; it really complements the theme of the poem. Congratulations on your win! :D P.S. You can check the status of the contests you joined through the "Member's Area" :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/24/2019 12:06:00 PM Thank You, for your note. I did not know, I could check the status of a contest. The Soup is all new for me. Enjoy your day......

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/9/2019 9:20:00 PM Fun one, Paula. Delightful. :) gw Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/10/2019 10:08:00 AM Glad you liked it. It was fun to write. Thank You for your note.

Ann Foster Date: 7/6/2019 5:30:00 PM Just a note to the winner...(keep it up) So many happy thoughts your way. Excellent work! Ann Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/6/2019 5:50:00 PM Thanks for reading and for your note. Happy thoughts and happy writing going back to you.

Jan Allison Date: 7/6/2019 8:15:00 AM a fun poem Paula, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/6/2019 5:48:00 PM I did not know about the win. Thank You, for reading my work and for letting me know. Again, Thank You.

Ann Foster Date: 6/29/2019 8:21:00 PM Okay, I absolutely love the "thoughts with pen". We should all follow our kids around, or at least our imagination, and then write things down. Truly lovely fun. Ann Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/1/2019 4:14:00 PM "Thoughts with a pen." When it is done like a turkey, I will let you read it. I am working with a pen. I am not sure if I am winning or if the pen is winning. Stay Tuned.