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Blue Daisy

Delicate and beautiful is sweet Daisy. She’s like a flowers’ petals that flutter in the breeze. Like a daisy’s center part - yellow as the sun - she is bright and cheerful, for she’s a lucky one. Every evening, with a smile, she is at the door - waiting for the handsome man who she calls “Amor.” They embrace when he arrives from his job each night. Always when he sees his wife, she’s a welcome sight. Friday is their special time - dinner out in lieu of his wife’s great cooking and she’ll be wearing blue! That’s her favorite color, so date night with her spouse, Daisy wears a bright blue dress or blue skirt with blouse. Yellow is the silken hair falling round her face. Other times, her hair is up. Both styles show her grace. “Ah, you’ve got on dancing shoes,” hubbie says to her. “Will we dance tonight?” she asks, her voice like a purr. Never does her spouse say no to his precious queen. That night they will be the pair the most joyful seen! Blue her eyes will shine for him like the sapphire stone that he bought to give to her when they’re all alone. Every day his actions say that he will stay true. “You are my Blue Daisy,” he whispers. “I love you.” June 20, 2017 in 7/5 Trochee Form (a type of quatrain)

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Date: 7/8/2017 9:58:00 PM
A lovely flow; I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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Date: 6/24/2017 6:35:00 PM
Wow, my romantic beautiful sister is so artful with her poetic Trochee.
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Date: 6/22/2017 8:45:00 PM
Very lovely and romantic, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 6/22/2017 4:58:00 PM
You know how to catch the reader's mind.
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Date: 6/22/2017 11:40:00 AM
absolutely beautiful, Andrea ~*
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Date: 6/22/2017 7:50:00 AM
Hi Andrea, excellent write as always. Such a lovely Quatrain with wonderful content. This is one of those poems i could read over and over. You know me Andrea, give me the romance and that you do. The romance sings out of the words. A joy to read Andrea. Wishing you luck in the contest. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 6/22/2017 3:23:00 AM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Lovely. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/21/2017 11:50:00 PM
What a sweet romantic write, Andrea:)
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Date: 6/21/2017 9:44:00 PM
Beautifully crafted my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/21/2017 7:39:00 PM
- So lovely and sweet written Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2017 5:40:00 PM
What a lovely lively poem, Andrea! Delightful and romantic. Reads like a great relationship:) Regards // paul
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Date: 6/21/2017 11:19:00 AM
I love this because he loves his Daisy so.
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Date: 6/21/2017 8:10:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea...hugs
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Date: 6/20/2017 9:24:00 PM
This is another wonderful example of your trochee form Andrea. I am pretty sure this one will score high. I especially love the way you ended it with and I love you. : )
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Date: 6/20/2017 6:49:00 PM
ah so romantic, loved this!
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Date: 6/20/2017 4:14:00 PM
A fantasy perhaps? A husband that never says "no" and has a happy ending:) Your upbeat personality is all over this one. Almost makes me angry somebody could be so cheerful. Lol It is a sweet fairy tale write, Andrea. Good luck!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/21/2017 12:28:00 AM
Yes, Danny, it's every woman's dream (at least the old fashioned woman's!) It's also a fable with a moral: if a man were to treat his wife this way (and she were a good woman) their marriage would indeed be heaven because that is the turn on for a woman, just to be listened to and loved like this.

Book: Shattered Sighs