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Please excuse this write, it is messy and poorly executed! It is more therapeutical than anything else! Will be editing it later on today!

Blue Daisy

Lay forth in front of me my will and soul To speak of such things to occur are told I, therefore seek refuge amongst the wild Now turning my attention to myself As I have come into this world alone I've made and lost close friends along the way Always shall we move through this universe In constant rest, nothing is motionless Come hail or shine we will remain in time A blue daisy, my love, I offer you On each petal, I leave a kiss come true Don't search for my heart for I've lost it now A new day shall dawn for you and your life And new memories be made just for you Never realising life the real dream As one petal falls a new one shall grow
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Another gem of a poem, WW. You move thru the cosmos w/the grace of an owl soaring in the air at night. Wonderful thoughts expressed in this lovely poem. I love going back reading your work, my dear friend. Hope you post more poems soon. Love and joy always.
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 7:39 PM
This is very lovely and appealing, White Wolf. Congrats on your win! Janice
Kimathi Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Greetings, White Wolf. Congrats for your well-deserved top placement in the contest, with this ingenious stroke of ink! ;-)
Warrior Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 4:29 PM
Congrats!!! my Wolfie friend...all the best...^WW^
Daniel Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 12:39 AM
Very sweet, White Wolf, congratulations on your win:)
Roper Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 8:33 PM
Congratulations on your win, WW, so beautiful ~*
May Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 6:51 PM
Congrats on your win WW
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 7:24 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poems, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lane Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Well written, Wolf. The third stanza is my favorite.
Smith Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 5:10 PM
Great job!! And great win :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 12:41 AM
Indeed you are growing. I see you are practicing iambic pentameter and many of the lines are spot on! I like the innovative way you did your blue daisy poem. that last line is priceless!
Wolf Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 1:02 AM
Yes, the operative word being practicing! Congrats on your haiku win too by the way! I like your hexsonnetta's, harder than you make them look! /|\
Smith Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 10:54 PM
Great job again!! Good luck in this one :)
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 10:55 PM
Thank you, Jeremy /|\
Zubair Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 11:28 AM
Beautifully haunting.
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Samiha /|\
Canerdy Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 9:45 AM
TRULY beautiful--very well-written, Afzal! Janice
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Bonjour, Janice! Thank you for your kind words /|\ Budgie!
Trifiatis Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Celebration of poetic expressions within a profound composition my friend, WW! Good luck. An excellent poem!
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Demetrios! So wonderful to see you on my page. Ravish life my friend /|\
Walker Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Beautifully penned Rick ! Best of luck in the contest :)
Walker Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Back to say Congrats on your win :)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 8:41 PM
Thank you kindly, Lenna /|\
Cozart Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Beautiful.
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Thank you, Dale /|\
Evans Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Beautiful!
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Thank you, Greg /|\
Turner Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 5:25 PM
A very good write, WW. Good luck in contest:)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Thank you kindly, Daniel /|\
Andresen Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 3:02 PM
- No one without a sensitive heart could write this beautiful poem, W.W. - Heartbreaking beautiful - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 3:06 PM
What a lovely thing to say, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much /|\
Green Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 2:07 PM
This was gorgeous my friend, a bit sad but I love that line about leaving a kiss on each petal of the blue daisy. So very cool. Wish I had thought of that.
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 2:11 PM
There you are, Chris! Buongiorno my friend and thank you /|\
Sands Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 1:44 PM
Oh so beautifully written White Wolf! Good luck in the contest. I hope this does well :)
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 1:47 PM
Thank you kindly, Heidi /|\
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