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Please excuse this write, it is messy and poorly executed! It is more therapeutical than anything else! Will be editing it later on today!

Lay forth in front of me my will and soul To speak of such things to occur are told I, therefore seek refuge amongst the wild Now turning my attention to myself As I have come into this world alone I've made and lost close friends along the way Always shall we move through this universe In constant rest, nothing is motionless Come hail or shine we will remain in time A blue daisy, my love, I offer you On each petal, I leave a kiss come true Don't search for my heart for I've lost it now A new day shall dawn for you and your life And new memories be made just for you Never realising life the real dream As one petal falls a new one shall grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/26/2017 9:27:00 PM
Another gem of a poem, WW. You move thru the cosmos w/the grace of an owl soaring in the air at night. Wonderful thoughts expressed in this lovely poem. I love going back reading your work, my dear friend. Hope you post more poems soon. Love and joy always.
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Date: 7/9/2017 7:39:00 PM
This is very lovely and appealing, White Wolf. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 7/9/2017 6:43:00 PM
Greetings, White Wolf. Congrats for your well-deserved top placement in the contest, with this ingenious stroke of ink! ;-)
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Date: 7/9/2017 4:29:00 PM
Congrats!!! my Wolfie friend...all the best...^WW^
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Date: 6/26/2017 12:39:00 AM
Very sweet, White Wolf, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 6/22/2017 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, WW, so beautiful ~*
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Date: 6/22/2017 6:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win WW
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Date: 6/21/2017 7:24:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poems, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2017 5:56:00 PM
Well written, Wolf. The third stanza is my favorite.
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Date: 6/21/2017 5:10:00 PM
Great job!! And great win :)
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Date: 6/21/2017 12:41:00 AM
Indeed you are growing. I see you are practicing iambic pentameter and many of the lines are spot on! I like the innovative way you did your blue daisy poem. that last line is priceless!
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White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 1:02:00 AM
Yes, the operative word being practicing! Congrats on your haiku win too by the way! I like your hexsonnetta's, harder than you make them look! /|\
Date: 6/20/2017 10:54:00 PM
Great job again!! Good luck in this one :)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/20/2017 10:55:00 PM
Thank you, Jeremy /|\
Date: 6/20/2017 11:28:00 AM
Beautifully haunting.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/20/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Samiha /|\
Date: 6/20/2017 9:45:00 AM
TRULY beautiful--very well-written, Afzal! Janice
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White Wolf
Date: 6/20/2017 5:40:00 PM
Bonjour, Janice! Thank you for your kind words /|\ Budgie!
Date: 6/20/2017 7:40:00 AM
Celebration of poetic expressions within a profound composition my friend, WW! Good luck. An excellent poem!
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White Wolf
Date: 6/20/2017 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios! So wonderful to see you on my page. Ravish life my friend /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 8:36:00 PM
Beautifully penned Rick ! Best of luck in the contest :)
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Lenna Walker
Date: 6/21/2017 7:47:00 PM
Back to say Congrats on your win :)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 8:41:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Lenna /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 6:22:00 PM
Beautiful.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 6:57:00 PM
Thank you, Dale /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful!
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 6:56:00 PM
Thank you, Greg /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 5:25:00 PM
A very good write, WW. Good luck in contest:)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Daniel /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 3:02:00 PM
- No one without a sensitive heart could write this beautiful poem, W.W. - Heartbreaking beautiful - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 3:06:00 PM
What a lovely thing to say, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 2:07:00 PM
This was gorgeous my friend, a bit sad but I love that line about leaving a kiss on each petal of the blue daisy. So very cool. Wish I had thought of that.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 2:11:00 PM
There you are, Chris! Buongiorno my friend and thank you /|\
Date: 6/19/2017 1:44:00 PM
Oh so beautifully written White Wolf! Good luck in the contest. I hope this does well :)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/19/2017 1:47:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Heidi /|\

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