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Blue Daisy Blue daisy in the field such sadness now you yield. My heart is clouded so, unlike by sunny glow of flowers that are bright and grow to bring delight. Your blue still fills my heart with thoughts that so impart a feeling of distress devoid of happiness. Your color makes me blue and breaks my heart in two. 'Twas blue I wrapped 'round him that day when life went dim, and laid him there to rest in his eternal nest; blue daisy at his side, the day he left and died. Still blue as blue can be; I lost my sweet kitty. For twenty years he was my baby wrapped in fuzz. In blanket soft and blue, with daisy...said adieu. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Premiere Contest: Blue Daisy Sponsor: Mystic Rose Judged: 06/21/2017

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Date: 6/22/2017 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Sandra. So sad, but excellent. ~*
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Date: 6/21/2017 11:21:00 PM
A very touching poem. Sad but sweet. Congrats on your win, Sandra.
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Date: 6/21/2017 9:07:00 PM
Back to congrats!!! Sandra...not surprised my friend...beautiful entry...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/21/2017 7:26:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful and sweet winning poems, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2017 5:55:00 PM
I know the pain in this kind of blue. Very well done, Sandra.
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Date: 6/21/2017 2:26:00 PM
A beautiful poetic tribute to your cat, Sandra.
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Date: 6/20/2017 12:35:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with your sad but touching write Sandra. Perfect penmanship.
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:47:00 PM
Lovely. Looks like a winner to me. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/19/2017 1:34:00 PM
Beautifully bluely written my friend...best of luck and god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:35:00 AM
Beauty in sadness, Mrs Sandra. Good luck in contest, sweet lady:)
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:02:00 AM
This is a very sad write, Sandra! Well crafted piece! GL
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Date: 6/19/2017 11:01:00 AM
Wow Sandra. So sad and well written.
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