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Blue Daisy

While lounging in my duster* watching news,
I have my morning coffee. When I'm through,
I wash my cup and saucer and admire
their elegance and pleasing shade of blue.

Like other lovely things I own--handbags,
Americana wreaths, and jewelry--
my dusters, cups, and saucers all came from
the popular Blue Daisy Company.

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Blue daisy plants don't flourish where I live;
and, even if they did, they wouldn't thrive
for me. I'm death to flowers! So I have
the artificial ones. They look alive!

Most of my rooms are graced with vases of
these blue silk beauties that appeal to my
calm, meditative side or to my sense 
of whimsy. Then they make me smile and sigh.


*housedress 

written June 18, 2017, and entered in Mystic Rose's Blue Daisy Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 8:37 PM
Didn't it win , Janice. I am seeing lots of really pretty ones that were not on her list. I know I sound like sour grapes, but I prefer the non premium contests!!! So many great poems get left out in the premium contests. This one is unique and I love your enjambment in it.
Canerdy Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I needed to hear that! Janice
Turner Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:22 AM
Nicely done, Mrs Janice with touch a touch of humor. You made me smile:)
Canerdy Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Glad to hear that! Thanks, Daniel. Janice
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 10:12 AM
Bonjour and Buongiorno, Janice! I have just recently started to study this form! And I admire those that can do it justice such as yourself! I'm sure we'll be seeing this one again on the winners' list! Great write and best of luck to you!
Canerdy Avatar
June 19, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Thanks so much for your encouraging comment, WW! Janice
Wanter Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 6:30 PM
A happy poem, Janice. I do like it.
Canerdy Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Thank you, Sunlite! Janice
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