Notes About The Poem

Blue Daisy

‘She loves me she loves me not’ the children's rhyme that had foretold
Blue daisy petals had predicted that Pat would wear a band of gold

Two lovers meet; they take shelter from an April shower
Steve is all set to propose in this woodland secluded bower

Her engagement ring holds a sapphire of bright periwinkle blue
As Steve presents her with the ring he whispers darling I love you

Tiny blue daisies are embroidered on the train of her wedding gown 
As Pat glides down the aisle to wed the most handsome man in town

The ceremony goes smoothly they are declared man and wife
Soon they move into their new home and start off their married life

In time Pat gets pregnant, the nine months waiting drives her crazy
She gives birth to a baby girl, of course they name their daughter Daisy!

Blue Daisy Contest
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June 15th 2017

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/15/2017 1:05:00 PM

This is the first time I've seen this one; luv'it! Congrat's on your win...it deserved to win.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2017 1:07:00 PM

Cheers ML:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/22/2017 8:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, the baby girl was called Daisy since the love of daisy the bride did like ~*

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2017 6:13:00 PM

Thanks Eve sorry i missed seeing the comment until now:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/22/2017 6:48:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2017 6:12:00 PM

Many thanks Jospeh sorry fr the delay in responding to your comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Afzal Nusker

Date: 6/21/2017 11:32:00 PM

Such a lovely poem on love doing well. Congrats on your win, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2017 12:45:00 AM

Thanks Afzal i was delighted to be on the winner's list:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 6/21/2017 8:10:00 PM

You share quite a history in these brief words. Congratulations, Jan, a great read.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2017 12:44:00 AM

Thanks so much Reason:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/21/2017 7:20:00 PM

- Congrats on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2017 7:21:00 PM

Many thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 6/21/2017 5:58:00 PM

A great condensed version of love gone right! Daughter Daisy, how perfect. Congrats on this one, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/21/2017 6:59:00 PM

Thanks Lin I KNEW yours would fly and the pic you used was superb:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 6/17/2017 9:07:00 AM

So great and excellent. Three words underrating this magnificient piece which has dragged my mind in the viscose silk of awe to really lack what to say. A definite 7 friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2017 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Funom:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/16/2017 12:46:00 PM

Absolutely delightful, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2017 3:18:00 PM

Thanks Janice I don't usually do romance poems but the pretty picture inspired me:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/15/2017 9:38:00 AM

A romantic story which develops without any hitches....right up to the birth of a lovely daughter. Hopefully they will all live happily ever after! gl in the contest, Jan...hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2017 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Paul I rarely write romantic poems but the picture inspire me:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/15/2017 5:46:00 AM

Very romantic with a lovely ending...Nicely penned Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2017 5:50:00 AM

Thanks Joseph I am not confident writing romantic poetry but the picture inspired me to come out of my usual comfort zone of humour:-)I hope Vienna likes it:-) hugs Jan xx