Blue Cotton Candy

Sometimes
life should be about
nothing more than
swirly upside down rides
and blue cotton candy
for in the end
pasts can’t be taken back
only relived
and the truth is
I’d rather live
happily
with my blue tongue
than die
with the past’s
bitter taste
on my lips.

8-8-09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 25, 2009 at 8:56 AM
Life is a roller coaster..a hill going down yet going up again..it will..im sure.!live happily with your blue tongue,i want to do that too,and i love the title:Blue Cotton Candle:im glad i reread this poem here and its going to my favs,the poet too--Charma
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October 24, 2009 at 11:20 PM
Great work, couldn't agree more, I'd rather live with the blue tongue also...Raul
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