Blue Cheese and Old Pickles

blue cheese, old pickles
golden girls fickle 
like falling nickles 
drop, spin, switching sides 
heads and tails collide
craving connections 
tangy affections 
gourmet selections

these eyes fixed you right 
put you in starlight
adjusting my sight
altering flavors 
new bees to savor 
selfishness favors
blue cheeses denied 
cornbread and grits, Hi!
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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:26 PM
Such. Cool poem. Loved the cute ending.
Layne Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 4:25 AM
Appreciated.
Crandall Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 5:37 PM
Great metaphor and sound!
Layne Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 4:25 AM
Thanks, David.
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