Blue Butterfly

In meadow flowers, one June afternoon,
I lay beside a brook, and its soft sound
was lulling me to sleep, so very soon
I fell into a dream, where all around
me flowers bloomed so big they seemed like trees,
for I was a small fairy! Then I saw
two giant wings that fluttered in the breeze -
their hue so brilliant blue I gaped in awe.
The creature landed, and it let me slide
onto its back. Above the brook we flew.
How wonderful it was that I could ride
above the meadow into sky of blue.

I woke! The first thing that I saw was sky,
and then - like magic - a blue butterfly.

October 3, 2019
Writing Challenge, October - Butterfly- Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
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Watt Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Really enjoyed this hybrid of dream and nature, especially your imaginative view of being a fairy on the back of a big blue butterfly. Super creative, Andrea. Congratulations on this well-deserved win!
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April 8, 2020 at 12:42 PM
A magical poem Andrea shifting effortlessly from dreaming to reality. Butterflies are magical. Thank you for taking us on this journey with you! Hope you are doing well. Blessings to you my friend and congratulations for your second place win.
Joyce Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 8:55 AM
how lovely and visionary this poem is :)))
La France Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Andrea congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem!
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:47 AM
- Lovely described ... congratulations on a great win in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 9:00 AM
An enchanting write.. Congrats on your win Andrea
Godwin Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:10 PM
Next time this happens direct the flight to Virginia so I may join you, surely there's enough room for two. Your healthy imagination wrote this and its sure to touch the imaginations of all who read it. I haven't a butterfly idea but no oh my or "I fear". Really enjoyed this. Love, CayCay
Anish Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:07 PM
A magical piece of work here! Let me know what you think of my latest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Proxenos Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 1:43 PM
Butterflies are hope and joy and oh so beautiful in their multitude of colours - I love this sonnet, it speaks volumes of joy and your imagery is stunning! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Walker Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 1:30 PM
My dear sweet sister you are the sonnet queen. Love the ending.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Butterflies emanate joy as this poem does Andrea. I loved it! : ) xxoo
Wood Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 9:05 AM
Andrea, this poem is a clinic! I just love the way you took me on an adventure without me even realizing this was a sonnet with a strict ABAB CDCD etc. rhyme scheme. Seamless, it flows like honey. Good luck, I hope this places well!
Poetry Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 1:32 PM
A wondrous adventure amid a dream Andie
Green Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 1:16 PM
A beautiful poetic dreams for sure. This was really nice Andrea. It floated softly across the page. Best wishes in the contest
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