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Blue, Blue Is My Ocean Dream

I am floating in a warm cerulean ocean dream
like clear glass 'till waves are stirring
oh, the vivid blue I see is tranquility in the ripples of water
and I am gliding noiselessly 

as the depth of my sorrow sinks below the ocean
so many blues in those waves embracing me 
like a lover 
my hair fanning out a soft spider web
my arms and legs outstretched in  
azure, cobalt, marine blue drifting waves

with periwinkle of a robin's egg up above in the sky
so cool the melancholy music of my ocean floating
oh, an indigo bird flies in the periwinkle sky
and the soft drifting clouds are in a blue cosmic dance

quietly, bright cornflower fish kiss my toes
blue, blue is my ocean dream


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January 6, 2019


Poetry/Free Verse/Blue
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Fairchild Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 10:15 PM
I had never seen the sparkling clear, blue waters like you describe -- after reading your poem, I feel like I have! Oh, JOY!
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Andrew, thanks for visiting with that nice comment ~
Leiser Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Beautiful imagery as I was carried away by your ocean theme, Constance! Wonderful and creative take on the “Blue” theme. Good luck in the contest! :)
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:27 PM
Laura, thanks for the lovely comment, appreciate ~
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