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I am floating in a warm cerulean ocean dream like clear glass 'till waves are stirring oh, the vivid blue I see is tranquility in the ripples of water and I am gliding noiselessly as the depth of my sorrow sinks below the ocean so many blues in those waves embracing me like a lover my hair fanning out a soft spider web my arms and legs outstretched in azure, cobalt, marine blue drifting waves with periwinkle of a robin's egg up above in the sky so cool the melancholy music of my ocean floating oh, an indigo bird flies in the periwinkle sky and the soft drifting clouds are in a blue cosmic dance quietly, bright cornflower fish kiss my toes blue, blue is my ocean dream __________________ January 6, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Blue Copyright Protected, ID 19-1101-563-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 1/6/2019 10:15:00 PM
I had never seen the sparkling clear, blue waters like you describe -- after reading your poem, I feel like I have! Oh, JOY!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2019 12:27:00 PM
Andrew, thanks for visiting with that nice comment ~
Date: 1/6/2019 9:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery as I was carried away by your ocean theme, Constance! Wonderful and creative take on the “Blue” theme. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2019 12:27:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the lovely comment, appreciate ~

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