Blue - An Apotheosis of Silence

Written: August 24, 2026, for: Week's Poetry Challenge: The Color Blue Blue, a zealot turned arrogant, fervor fading into hauteur, devotion darkened into disdain. sapient in its sway, dulcet as hymns and still a shade of seashell. It limns the sky’s scriptorium, A selfish scroll of sequins Stippling clouds with crevice cracks. A symbol for suns that sail away. desuetude drapes the shore— The ocean exhorts a savage screech a spindle scream against scree and stone. Blue epitomizes arrogance. indulgent in its rejection, a wicked shade, funny but sad, a spirit of saudade. It speaks in sonic waves, furtive, fecund, effete— a hallucinative hymn unraveling across the horizon. flecked with fanfare froth Blue is the ache of elsewhere, a pertinacity of longing, an obvious evil, yet a harvest of comfort— an ethereal respite, a lullaby of light. And silence, salient, settles— blue bows its zealot head, a final hush, the sky exhales, a lucid lull remains.
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George Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 7:17 AM
I just bow before your wordsmithry. You are a juggler with words creating magic.ln your poem you don't simply give meaning, but create tantalizing magic. No words, just a Wow!🔥👍⭐
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August 25, 2026 at 12:16 AM
A richly musical and intellectually daring meditation on blue. The poem’s elevated diction, lush alliteration, and shifting sea-and-sky imagery give the colour a commanding, almost mythic personality. I especially admired how its turbulence gradually resolves into the serene, beautifully hushed final lines.
Gibbons Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 11:15 PM
Fantastic write ✍️ Sotto like Andrea some words I thought 🤔 new word for me. You sure are a man of many awesome words. A pleasure reading your weekly challenge my friend 😀hugzzz
Edmonds  Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 8:18 PM
Beautiful poetry Sotto -‘an ethereal respite, a lullaby of light’ - lovely words… Beryl
Wolf Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 8:17 PM
I'll get back to you when I find a better online dictionary, Sotto. You are THE word-maven with this one! Wow!
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 5:52 PM
Love that "ache of elsewhere" and " a spirit of saudade" I can really feel blue in those ways. A few words you use are ones I never heard of. How do you know all these words, Sotto? It's incredible!
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