Blue

BLUE come blessed sleep i’ve a wish to dream no more no more sheep getting lost in the corn that infernal horn Dave Austin

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 7/27/2016 11:04:00 AM

Little Boy Blue, Daver? Maybe he had fallen asleep in a haystack.I need to tell you that I'd forgotten to add my letter to the parcel. fI'd written one that same morning, and that's no dream. Think of the painting as something that had been abandoned. Many walked past it, but nobody wanted it. I've found it a new and caring home!? Kep well, love, Mikki

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/17/2015 3:22:00 AM

Counting sheep never works for me either, and the foghorn in the bay can be a necessary torment. Very best wishes~Delice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2015 11:14:00 PM

haha, yep, that is insomnia for ya!!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/10/2015 3:45:00 PM

great tanka daver:-) hugs jan xx