Blue

Blue as the ocean
That reflects the sky above
The beautiful ****
With the suggestion of love
The blues music's haunting sound




10 May 2013

bluecolortanka

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Jack Horne

May 11, 2013 at 3:38 PM

love this beautiful tanka, Seren

Seren Roberts

May 11, 2013 at 11:32 PM

Thank u Jack .....Seren

Russell Sivey

May 10, 2013 at 5:59 AM

Here again I could feel the color blue within your delightful write! You have amassed a creative and wonderful poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts

May 11, 2013 at 11:34 PM

Thank you Russell, you lft my spirits when low, with your comments ...Seren