T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Poet Tanka

Blue

Feelings of saddness.
Alone in the dark halls of my heart.
Dream of darkness.
Saddness overwhelms the soul.
Talk to me so I'm not alone.
          Teresa Skyles

Entered in Francine Roberts"blue"contest

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Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2011 at 7:37 PM Ahh, you took the sad path, and did very well with it, sweetie!

Sara Kendrick February 9, 2011 at 3:52 PM Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta February 9, 2011 at 3:19 PM Nice creative write on the blue feelings, Teresa. Good luck in the contest.

Michael J. Falotico February 9, 2011 at 3:09 PM Very good Teresa, I love the feelings expressed...luv Michael

Robert Pettit February 9, 2011 at 2:22 PM Nice writing. Just remove the apostrophe from "feeling's". No genitive or possessive case exists there. The word is merely pluralized.