Blue

She wore blue velvet And he had the blue suede shoes Hes blue cause their through This little boy blew his horn What ever happened to pink? By: Sharon Ruebel Contest: Blue Sponsor: Francine Roberts Form: Tanka

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Harry Horsman

Date: 2/16/2011 12:46:00 AM

Love this Sharon,glad i 've manage to read it. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2011 12:28:00 PM

Oh, this is so cute, Sharon! Hope you stay in the "pink" and never have to experience the blues. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/10/2011 11:46:00 AM

Sharon what a cute approach to the contest.. Good luck with this witty write, love Wilma

Julie Heckman

Date: 2/10/2011 11:43:00 AM

A very clever write. good luck in the contest and thank you for your comment about "A Beautiful Breed". Julie

Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2011 10:24:00 PM

Nice Tanka with a touch of humour!--Goodluck in the contest---kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2011 3:58:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this one that had me remembering...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/9/2011 3:32:00 PM

Nice and cute entry to the contest on the theme of the b lue. Good luck, Shar

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/9/2011 3:10:00 PM

I love your BLUE write Shar... it should do very well in the contest...luv Michael

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/9/2011 2:56:00 PM

smile -- sooo very sweet and yes, i would surely be blue also if, i were to lose someone as beautiful as You and, yes again, Pink, is one of the softest most magnificently beautiful colours in the world my dear, "Beautiful & Priceless Sharon Ruebel." ~ and, "Your Treasures," would be the Perfect reflection of such loveliness, i truly do believe ~ loved the humour and these, hues of sweet ~ love, Always, christopher ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2011 1:51:00 PM

I really liked the girl and boy lines, two of the most popular blue clothing items, the blue suede shoes and the blue velvet. Good luck in the contest, sweetie. And I enjoyed hearing about your doggie. I miss the one I used to have. LUv, Andrea

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/9/2011 12:12:00 PM

I think Francine will like reading this one. It looks like a good entry for the contest.