Blue

Blue completely blue.
The walls in this place are blue.
Outside skies are blue.
In the skies bells ring, birds sing.
Until freedom mood is blue.


By: Jimmy Anderson
For "blue"  contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 7:25 PM
I like this write Jimmy. Don't feel bad. My entry didn't make it either.
Neels Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 10:24 AM
A stunning thought provoking Tanka Jimmy ;-) all the best for the contest
Wilson Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 2:20 AM
All that blue might make you blue! good luck in the contest Jimmy..love,Deb
Mehta Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 3:34 PM
beautiful expressions on the word blue with varied meanings, Jimmy
Falotico Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Very creative Jimmy, this is sur to well in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 2:13 PM
Even the walls, JImmy? Geeez,well, I sure like this one! Luv, Andrea
Bloomsfield Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 12:34 PM
Love your 'blue ' poem Jimmy,hope you are fine,glad to read your poems again.
Haick Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Best of luck in the contest, JAM. Love, Annalise
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