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Blue marble in space On your vagabond journey Through the galaxy Plying your eternal bourne Please avoid those asteroids Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Entry for Francine Robert's "Blue" Contest

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Date: 10/6/2013 9:57:00 AM
Bob H.,... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Date: 10/2/2013 7:20:00 PM
I was automatically captured and wanted to read on. Simple and a great poem.
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:05:00 PM
Congrats, Bob, on your tanka, "Blue", being featured.
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Date: 9/30/2013 9:40:00 AM
Nice blue-view, Sarge. Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
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Date: 2/23/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:36:00 PM
LOL yes please we have enough going on here now STAY AWAY FROM THE FLYING ROCKS!!! LOL congrad's on your win. Light 7 love
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Date: 2/11/2011 11:46:00 AM
Excellent Tanka entry, Bob. Enjoyed. Good luck. You guys have a great weekend. No snow in the immediate future! Best to you guys and be well. luv Una/Ralph
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Date: 2/11/2011 8:20:00 AM
Beautiful Tanka!Congrats Robert on your HM in this conest--kashinath
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congrats Bob on your HM in the blue contest with this awesome entry my friend... enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:22:00 PM
aha, another planetary one that made the list. Congratulations, Robert. I really like the cute ending on this one.
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Date: 2/10/2011 7:12:00 PM
Bob, congratulations on attaining honorable mention with this fine entry. Why didn't I see this one earlier?
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Date: 2/10/2011 3:47:00 PM
Bob, congratulations on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/10/2011 2:19:00 PM
Very nice flow! I especially love your fourth line. Congratulations on your honourable mention.
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Blue" Contest, Robert. We were on similar wave length, it seems. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/10/2011 12:21:00 PM
Delighted to see your poem on the winners' list, Bob. Congratulations! (The last line made me giggle even on the second reading.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/10/2011 12:15:00 PM
Nice one, Robert - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:57:00 AM
You got me smiling with your last line, Bob! I hope blue marble takes not of your plea ;) -- Enjoyed this one very much! Congrats for being in the winners' circle :)
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:30:00 AM
congrats on your Honorable Mention in the contest Bob
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Date: 2/10/2011 9:19:00 AM
A cool job on an interesting Contest Bob. Good luck. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/10/2011 6:43:00 AM
Great one from a different angle..Reads like a winner..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 2/9/2011 10:12:00 PM
Wonderful!A celestial journey well penned.--kashinath
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:51:00 PM
Very novel theme you have penned for the word blue, Bob. good luck in the contest. It's a real stunner.
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:39:00 PM
Excellent well constructed Tanka Bob.. Should do very well in the contest...And yes go PACKERS!!! Great game!!
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Date: 2/9/2011 1:56:00 PM
Very good, Robert. It's really fun to see how people are doing this contest!
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Date: 2/9/2011 1:13:00 PM
Now this is my kind of journey Bob! Good luck for Francine's contest.. ;-) W
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