Blue

In mystic waves dive
Sea guards a stern endlessness.
Waken brunts of sky
Rush to blend into my mind,
As I smell the coming dawn.

"blue"-valeria iliadou
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horsman Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 6:36 AM
awesome valeria, enjoyed this gem. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Nicely done, valeria. I enjoyed your interpretation of blue! Luv, Andrea
Pettit Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 8:04 PM
Nice write, but watch the syllable count. You have one too many syllables in all lines except the first.
Mehta Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Nice write onthe blue, good luck in the contest, valeria
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