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BLUE

In mystic waves dive Sea guards a stern endlessness. Waken brunts of sky Rush to blend into my mind, As I smell the coming dawn. "blue"-valeria iliadou

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/9/2011 6:36:00 AM
awesome valeria, enjoyed this gem. Harry
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Date: 2/8/2011 10:50:00 PM
Nicely done, valeria. I enjoyed your interpretation of blue! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/8/2011 8:04:00 PM
Nice write, but watch the syllable count. You have one too many syllables in all lines except the first.
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:43:00 PM
Nice write onthe blue, good luck in the contest, valeria
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