Sara Kendrick Poet Tanka

Blue

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                                                      Blue Ocean Water
                                                Softly touch blue horizon
                                                  Great blue Heron flies

                                           Great Blue Heron camouflaged
                                                  Easy fishing jolt attack



Contest: "blue"
For: Francine Roberts
Written by: Sara Kendrick

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet February 10, 2011 at 1:05 PM A terrific read Sara.Your poems inspire me to try harder.Thanks for your very kind comments.You take care.~Teresa~

Carol Fillmore February 10, 2011 at 8:54 AM This great blue heron has inspired you! Great write, Sara:) Good luck in the contest:) Thanks for your comment on "Blue" and the good luck in contest:) Carol

John Freeman February 10, 2011 at 8:47 AM Looks like your have the blues in stride Sara. Smile. Good luck in the contest. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire February 9, 2011 at 9:12 AM These gorgeous birds do seem to blend in with the water, Sara. Great tanka for the contest. Best wishes for success, Carolyn

George Aul February 9, 2011 at 9:07 AM I like the picture you portray...good luck in the contest.......George

Kash Poet February 9, 2011 at 7:32 AM Wonderful entry for the contest Sara--Enjoyed---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 9, 2011 at 7:10 AM Wonderful write and entry Sara.. good luck in the contest.. enjoyed the many things blue encompasses in your lines... good luck with luv..

Samir Georges February 9, 2011 at 12:06 AM You gave the color life, and it's breath seems to have touched every word you've written.

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2011 at 10:26 PM Very nice, Sara. Love your blue images! Luv, Andrea

Robert Pettit February 8, 2011 at 7:59 PM Nice entry for Francine's contest. These birds can be seen at the New Jersey shore quite often.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 8, 2011 at 5:46 PM fantastic meaningful entry tothe contest, Sara