Michael Vacek Poet Rhyme

Blowing Bubbles

Two breaths, she and I at one time,
One brightest pink wand freshly wet dipped,
Translucent rainbow film sublime,
Dreams of enchanted love gently sipped.

Quivering, weightless half moons gleefully dancing,
Newly full from the circle into the breeze.
Both she and I upward, expectantly glancing,
At orbs like swallows amongst greenest of trees.

Some burst on creation's delicate leafy touch,
Each heart yearning to meet the bluest of sky.
Floating bubbles of youth anticipating much.
Hoping our breaths together may never die.

9/11/17
Help Me Fall In Love
Judged 09-14-17

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Gregory Richard Barden October 13, 2017 at 5:15 AM Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, Michael - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-) Michael Vacek October 13, 2017 at 9:05 AM Thanks Greg

Constance La France October 11, 2017 at 9:09 PM Michael, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem in my contest! Michael Vacek October 13, 2017 at 9:05 AM Thank you Broken Wings

John Hamilton September 12, 2017 at 11:50 AM Wow so romantic Michael I am really enjoying reading your work, should do well in the contest! Michael Vacek September 12, 2017 at 4:56 PM this poem was inspired by Vijay Pandit's "Stalemate" poem. I just delved a little deeper into one of his lines of thought. Thank you for the wonderful words.