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Blowing Bubbles

Two breaths, she and I at one time, One brightest pink wand freshly wet dipped, Translucent rainbow film sublime, Dreams of enchanted love gently sipped. Quivering, weightless half moons gleefully dancing, Newly full from the circle into the breeze. Both she and I upward, expectantly glancing, At orbs like swallows amongst greenest of trees. Some burst on creation's delicate leafy touch, Each heart yearning to meet the bluest of sky. Floating bubbles of youth anticipating much. Hoping our breaths together may never die. 9/11/17 Help Me Fall In Love Judged 09-14-17

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Date: 10/13/2017 5:15:00 AM
Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, Michael - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-)
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/13/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thanks Greg
Date: 10/11/2017 9:09:00 PM
Michael, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem in my contest!
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Michael Vacek
Date: 10/13/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings
Date: 9/12/2017 11:50:00 AM
Wow so romantic Michael I am really enjoying reading your work, should do well in the contest!
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Michael Vacek
Date: 9/12/2017 4:56:00 PM
this poem was inspired by Vijay Pandit's "Stalemate" poem. I just delved a little deeper into one of his lines of thought. Thank you for the wonderful words.

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