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Blowing a Kiss To You

I just blew a kiss on a cool summer breeze Comming from Wisconsin, it's going to taste like cheese It's for a dear friend who lives quite far away So I'm hoping she will recieve it, within the next day I also hope she doesn't mind the flavor of this kiss But if she loves cheese like me, the taste will be bliss Floating through the air past all the factories of cheese The dreamy taste of this kiss, will be sure to please Though I must warn her not to eat with that blissful kiss on her lips For all food will taste delightful, which may add a little weight to her hips
8-8-12 To:Vie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/24/2014 11:11:00 AM
Dan, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:29:00 PM
impress write... great lines.. I just blew a kiss on a cool summer breeze
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Date: 10/1/2012 2:45:00 AM
hehehehe....so missed reading your poems. I'm so glad to have found some time to get back on P.S. Love this Dan....cute with a comical bliss :)
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Date: 9/14/2012 6:04:00 AM
Try not to blow kisses, they go right past the place they're supposed to. Say, I've got a po that needs a bit of Kearly in it; are you on it?
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:06:00 PM
i just hope it's not limburger cheese which smells like hell, and on her lips that taste will dwell. ha ha good write
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Date: 8/24/2012 9:07:00 PM
You sure know how to put a smile on a girl's face or anybody's for that matter. You're funny. Would we trade you? Never! :)
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Date: 8/22/2012 6:06:00 PM
I love it. No wonder you walked away with a win on this one. Great stuff, Dannyboy. :)
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Date: 8/16/2012 8:54:00 PM
very nicely done for humor, Dan. Love the state of Wisconsin and the cheesehead humor. I remember visiting a dairy farm when on a family vacation many years ago to Wisconsin. I loved your poem. Big congrats in the contest.
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:10:00 PM
This is so cute and hilarious. I love your poetry! So sorry I haven't been on lately. Thanks for all your support and keep writing! 8) Always, Laura
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Date: 8/16/2012 2:15:00 PM
congrats Dan on a big top ten win for a super gal Vie.. she is tops and so is this kiss and write luv..
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:11:00 AM
Love you Linda
Date: 8/16/2012 2:05:00 PM
Congrats on you win Dan....well done. :) - - S-mail - oxox f.e.f. Anne-Lise
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:59:00 PM
Your last line made me smile:)Lovely kiss for Vie here.Congrats Dan on your win!
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:41:00 PM
congrads and she is a nice kiss.
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:39:00 PM
Adorable and funny, too! Love it, Dan...congrats on your win!! Love and Blessings :))
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Date: 8/16/2012 11:57:00 AM
Dan, congratulations on your win in MJF's contest with this beauty.. enjoyed the rhyme ;) wilma
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Date: 8/16/2012 11:14:00 AM
Oh how delightful...my family is a bunch of cheese-heads so i really enjoyed this one. Congrats. BG
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Date: 8/16/2012 10:49:00 AM
Dan, congrats on your win, great choice...David
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Date: 8/16/2012 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place with this lovely poem xx
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Blowing A Kiss To You" contest Dan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:26:00 AM
A great place to blow a kiss too.. Great write Dan,.... Thanks for supporting my contest... Michael
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Date: 8/12/2012 6:53:00 AM
Am I far enough to claim the kiss? I love cheese but think it doesn't mix with kisses so go brush your teeth! :) Fun verse Danny boy! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 8/11/2012 6:25:00 PM
oh yes good luck in cotest,one love ivy
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Date: 8/11/2012 6:24:00 PM
dear Dan,thank you for very taste kiss,I will pretend that is for me,Ivy
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:46:00 AM
another dedication to Vie, so deservingly, and Dan this is a wonderful poem.
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:23:00 AM
Very funny...lol..good luck in contest ;o)Hugs Laila
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