Blowing a Kiss To You

I just blew a kiss on a cool summer breeze Comming from Wisconsin, it's going to taste like cheese It's for a dear friend who lives quite far away So I'm hoping she will recieve it, within the next day I also hope she doesn't mind the flavor of this kiss But if she loves cheese like me, the taste will be bliss Floating through the air past all the factories of cheese The dreamy taste of this kiss, will be sure to please Though I must warn her not to eat with that blissful kiss on her lips For all food will taste delightful, which may add a little weight to her hips
8-8-12 To:Vie
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A   Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Dan, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA
Lander Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 8:29 PM
impress write... great lines.. I just blew a kiss on a cool summer breeze
Cheesman Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 2:45 AM
hehehehe....so missed reading your poems. I'm so glad to have found some time to get back on P.S. Love this Dan....cute with a comical bliss :)
Wesley Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 6:04 AM
Try not to blow kisses, they go right past the place they're supposed to. Say, I've got a po that needs a bit of Kearly in it; are you on it?
Rams Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 7:06 PM
i just hope it's not limburger cheese which smells like hell, and on her lips that taste will dwell. ha ha good write
Wesley Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 9:07 PM
You sure know how to put a smile on a girl's face or anybody's for that matter. You're funny. Would we trade you? Never! :)
Hendricks Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 6:06 PM
I love it. No wonder you walked away with a win on this one. Great stuff, Dannyboy. :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 8:54 PM
very nicely done for humor, Dan. Love the state of Wisconsin and the cheesehead humor. I remember visiting a dairy farm when on a family vacation many years ago to Wisconsin. I loved your poem. Big congrats in the contest.
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August 16, 2012 at 6:10 PM
This is so cute and hilarious. I love your poetry! So sorry I haven't been on lately. Thanks for all your support and keep writing! 8) Always, Laura
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 2:15 PM
congrats Dan on a big top ten win for a super gal Vie.. she is tops and so is this kiss and write luv..
A   Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Love you Linda
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 2:05 PM
Congrats on you win Dan....well done. :) - - S-mail - oxox f.e.f. Anne-Lise
Poet Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 1:59 PM
Your last line made me smile:)Lovely kiss for Vie here.Congrats Dan on your win!
Situation Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 1:41 PM
congrads and she is a nice kiss.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Adorable and funny, too! Love it, Dan...congrats on your win!! Love and Blessings :))
Neels Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Dan, congratulations on your win in MJF's contest with this beauty.. enjoyed the rhyme ;) wilma
Gorelick Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Oh how delightful...my family is a bunch of cheese-heads so i really enjoyed this one. Congrats. BG
Williams Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Dan, congrats on your win, great choice...David
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August 16, 2012 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations on your winning place with this lovely poem xx
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Blowing A Kiss To You" contest Dan. Love, Carol
Falotico Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:26 AM
A great place to blow a kiss too.. Great write Dan,.... Thanks for supporting my contest... Michael
Wesley Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 6:53 AM
Am I far enough to claim the kiss? I love cheese but think it doesn't mix with kisses so go brush your teeth! :) Fun verse Danny boy! Luv, Lizzie
Vresk Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 6:25 PM
oh yes good luck in cotest,one love ivy
Vresk Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 6:24 PM
dear Dan,thank you for very taste kiss,I will pretend that is for me,Ivy
Horsman Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 8:46 AM
another dedication to Vie, so deservingly, and Dan this is a wonderful poem.
Mjelde Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Very funny...lol..good luck in contest ;o)Hugs Laila
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