Wilma Neels Poet Tanka

'blowing a Kiss To You'

With a skyward glance
I am counting stars tonight
hope that you are too
because every star you see
signify a kiss from me

*dedicated to Mr. Inverness, James Fraser* 

For MJF 
©050820121900

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Harry Horsman April 13, 2020 at 1:43 AM Picked out of my favourite poem list on soup. love this dedication, Wilma, Stay Safe.

Debbie Duncan September 21, 2012 at 5:33 PM Oh I like this little kiss here ;} thank you for leaving such nice comments on my words ;}

Gwendolen Song August 23, 2012 at 5:03 PM Had to come back and reread this dreamy kiss...smmoooccchhhh...I read Arild's entry this morning and loved it BIG TIME!! gwendolen

Dan Kearley August 23, 2012 at 4:20 PM Awesome indeed! :o)

Olusegun Arowolo August 17, 2012 at 8:19 PM Awesome write,Wilma.great job..Congrats on your well deserved win..love OLUSEGUN.

Gwendolen Song August 17, 2012 at 3:21 AM You wrote a wonderful kissing poem...even the stars communicate romance thru this winning write...u are an awesome poet, Wilms. luv, gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A August 16, 2012 at 11:06 PM WIlma, congratulations with your awesome kiss, in Michael's "Blowing a Kiss" contest ... enjoyed your poem, always~ PD

Doreen Wright August 16, 2012 at 6:01 PM Many stars, many kisses, lovely tanka! Congrats to you!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 16, 2012 at 2:07 PM congrats Wilma on a wonderful win for this sweet poem to Michael sealed with a kiss .. awesome one ..

Kash Poet August 16, 2012 at 1:50 PM I loved this one on first read Wilma..congrats on your win!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 16, 2012 at 1:22 PM Love those starlit kisses, Wilma! Congrats on your win!! Love and Blessings :))

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2012 at 12:26 PM Way to go on your win, Wilma. congratulations in the contest.

Barbara Gorelick August 16, 2012 at 11:10 AM Simple and perfect..congrats to you. BG

David Williams August 16, 2012 at 10:43 AM Wilma congrats on your suepr win, lucky James...David

Joseph May August 16, 2012 at 9:55 AM lovely poem....congrats on your win Wilma

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 16, 2012 at 8:10 AM Congratulations on your winning place with this lovely poem xx

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2012 at 6:21 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Michael's "Blowing A Kiss To You" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico August 16, 2012 at 6:14 AM Short sweet and lovely ... just like the poet... U the man James!! Congrats CTH... hugsn luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2012 at 8:36 PM what a sweet one for James. Gosh, and he has not even seen it? hmmmmm, I will fix that!!

Harry Horsman August 6, 2012 at 10:32 AM Well i've missed you Wilma, not able to be here a lot these days, but what a beautiful poem when catching up with you, Has to go to my fav, to join the many of yours i've there, James will love this i'm sure, harry

Kash Poet August 5, 2012 at 6:41 PM Wow!!Excellent kiss here Wilma ;-)

Chris Lane August 5, 2012 at 2:34 PM Fantastic delivery of words....Beautiful! Chris

Joann Grisetti August 5, 2012 at 1:20 PM Moving tanka. Hope all is well with you.

David Williams August 5, 2012 at 12:47 PM Wilma great words to a great poet, best of luck..David

Russell Sivey August 5, 2012 at 11:37 AM Oh wow, this is a very beautiful poem that you have written here my friend! Incredibly perfect in every way, I can feel the other person counting her stars and receiving her kisses from me! What a wonderful piece here Wilma! Great Work!!