Blow Gently Sweet Breeze

The clouds
are wispy today.
Ragged, tattered puffs
drifting apart.
Telling us that nothing
stays the same.
The good, bad, the ugly,
drifting across our path…
to scatter our lives 
to the wind.
Blow gently sweet breeze,
blow gently.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Clemons Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Nicely expressed, Charles. The simplicity and of the blowing wind, and yet possesses a relaxing purpose. Enjoyable poem. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out some of my poems. Might find you one you like.
Henderson Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:43 AM
I will make a point to ck out your poetry. Am just heading out to out wrestle a chain saw, but I know who will win in the end. Five straight days of intermitant showers every few hours and the green stuff looks like it has been eating fertilizer. Ck. you later- -chas
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:12 AM
The winds of change are sadly not always gentle. Great poem.
Kovrlija Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 10:07 AM
A beautiful poem
Gorelick Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 6:37 PM
A beautiful piece..makes one think. BG
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