Blossoms Sway Gently In the Breeze

Blossoms sway in the gentle breeze…
A benevolent sojourner 
Never to let them entirely still--
Same brightly colored blooms
Now, of their own volition
Turning toward morning sun,
But He is no mere Puppet-master
In a light-sense--
His strings the silk 
Of Freedom-gleams...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 6, 2016 at 7:24 PM
'No mere Puppet master' 'benevolent sojourner', would that be the Almighty that strings the silk of your poetry? A delicately pure rendition.
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October 7, 2016 at 6:34 AM
This is very kind of you. I really don't know how to reply to your lovely comment. Blessings my friend. Have a perfectly beautiful day!!
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September 27, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Joe, what a perfect gentle place you brought me to in this cool poem! thanks! jim
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September 27, 2016 at 7:49 AM
Hi Jim: thank you. You made my day! Blessings friend!
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