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Blossoms Sway Gently In the Breeze

Blossoms sway in the gentle breeze… A benevolent sojourner Never to let them entirely still-- Same brightly colored blooms Now, of their own volition Turning toward morning sun, But He is no mere Puppet-master In a light-sense-- His strings the silk Of Freedom-gleams...

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Date: 10/6/2016 7:24:00 PM
'No mere Puppet master' 'benevolent sojourner', would that be the Almighty that strings the silk of your poetry? A delicately pure rendition.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/7/2016 6:34:00 AM
This is very kind of you. I really don't know how to reply to your lovely comment. Blessings my friend. Have a perfectly beautiful day!!
Date: 9/27/2016 7:37:00 AM
Joe, what a perfect gentle place you brought me to in this cool poem! thanks! jim
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/27/2016 7:49:00 AM
Hi Jim: thank you. You made my day! Blessings friend!

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