Carrie Richards Poet Quatrain

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Blossoms and Bubbles

If I were a blossom, released and set free
I'd bring you a message, of promise, to lend 
With fragrance and color, how glad you would be!
Such hope-everlasting, brings spring without end

If I were a bubble, I'd  glisten and shine
Lifting your spirit, leaving troubles  behind
I'd fly to the rafters, and gleam in the sun
Fly after the rainbows, where worries are none

If blossoms and bubbles, could take you away
I'd wish to be welcomed,  like sweet morning rain
Just for one moment, just to brighten the day
To lighten your troubles, and ease every pain



4/6/15

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 5:46 PM Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~

Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:49 PM so delightful Carrie congrats hugs 7

Nette Onclaud April 14, 2015 at 1:20 AM this fills me up, carrie.. big congrats on your fine award!

Debbie Guzzi April 13, 2015 at 10:34 PM A joyful verse I enjoyed very much! Congrad's on your big win! Light & LOve

Kp Nunez April 13, 2015 at 12:34 PM A fab poem, Carrie. The rhythm and rhyme is just great. Congratulations! :)

Frederic Parker April 12, 2015 at 7:23 PM Congratulations Carrie, This is the first time I've read this poem and while reading it I couldn't help but hear the sound of laughter from my grand-daughter when I make soap bubbles that hang in the air for her to chase

Jan Allison April 12, 2015 at 6:14 PM Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr April 12, 2015 at 4:31 PM Congratulations Carrie on your win,well done.

Eve Roper April 12, 2015 at 2:48 PM Wonderful imagery, the scene is so vivid in my mind. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 12, 2015 at 9:47 AM ----How can I forget the sweet sweet way you did this poem, just on the first stanza you already built a connection with me. The way you present this poem is so soft. You presented well how blossoms and bubbles beauty then soothes and entertain.. clever personification that no one else from the other entries used that!!! I love it... :) I find this poem like "my suitor" hehehhe.. :D! YOU ARE MY 4TH! ;) thank you and CONGRATULATIONS!HUGS//olive eloisa

John Lawless April 12, 2015 at 9:44 AM Carrie, this poem is a "blossom, released and set free". Nicely done, congrats on a well deserved placement.

Sneha Rv April 11, 2015 at 2:03 AM Amazing! All the best!! :D

Tim Smith April 6, 2015 at 7:35 PM A beautiful write of hope and freedom Carrie...good luck in the contest...Tim

Jaycee Cervenka April 6, 2015 at 3:51 PM Oh I do like this one Carrie. I agree with Jan, that it should do well. You've embraced the happy tone of the subjects and threaded through the write. Good Luck in the contest! ~Janet

Jan Allison April 6, 2015 at 3:17 PM Simply wonderful imagery Carrie - good luck in the contest - this will fly high:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx