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Blossoms and Bubbles

If I were a blossom, released and set free
I'd bring you a message, of promise, to lend 
With fragrance and color, how glad you would be!
Such hope-everlasting, brings spring without end

If I were a bubble, I'd  glisten and shine
Lifting your spirit, leaving troubles  behind
I'd fly to the rafters, and gleam in the sun
Fly after the rainbows, where worries are none

If blossoms and bubbles, could take you away
I'd wish to be welcomed,  like sweet morning rain
Just for one moment, just to brighten the day
To lighten your troubles, and ease every pain



4/6/15

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/18/2015 5:46:00 PM Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~ Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 4/14/2015 5:49:00 PM so delightful Carrie congrats hugs 7 Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/14/2015 1:20:00 AM this fills me up, carrie.. big congrats on your fine award! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/13/2015 10:34:00 PM A joyful verse I enjoyed very much! Congrad's on your big win! Light & LOve Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 4/13/2015 12:34:00 PM A fab poem, Carrie. The rhythm and rhyme is just great. Congratulations! :) Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 4/12/2015 7:23:00 PM Congratulations Carrie, This is the first time I've read this poem and while reading it I couldn't help but hear the sound of laughter from my grand-daughter when I make soap bubbles that hang in the air for her to chase Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/12/2015 6:14:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 4/12/2015 4:31:00 PM Congratulations Carrie on your win,well done. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/12/2015 2:48:00 PM Wonderful imagery, the scene is so vivid in my mind. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/12/2015 9:47:00 AM ----How can I forget the sweet sweet way you did this poem, just on the first stanza you already built a connection with me. The way you present this poem is so soft. You presented well how blossoms and bubbles beauty then soothes and entertain.. clever personification that no one else from the other entries used that!!! I love it... :) I find this poem like "my suitor" hehehhe.. :D! YOU ARE MY 4TH! ;) thank you and CONGRATULATIONS!HUGS//olive eloisa Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 4/12/2015 9:44:00 AM Carrie, this poem is a "blossom, released and set free". Nicely done, congrats on a well deserved placement. Login to Reply

Sneha Rv Date: 4/11/2015 2:03:00 AM Amazing! All the best!! :D Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 4/6/2015 7:35:00 PM A beautiful write of hope and freedom Carrie...good luck in the contest...Tim Login to Reply

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 4/6/2015 3:51:00 PM Oh I do like this one Carrie. I agree with Jan, that it should do well. You've embraced the happy tone of the subjects and threaded through the write. Good Luck in the contest! ~Janet Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/6/2015 3:17:00 PM Simply wonderful imagery Carrie - good luck in the contest - this will fly high:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply