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If I were a blossom, released and set free I'd bring you a message, of promise, to lend With fragrance and color, how glad you would be! Such hope-everlasting, brings spring without end If I were a bubble, I'd glisten and shine Lifting your spirit, leaving troubles behind I'd fly to the rafters, and gleam in the sun Fly after the rainbows, where worries are none If blossoms and bubbles, could take you away I'd wish to be welcomed, like sweet morning rain Just for one moment, just to brighten the day To lighten your troubles, and ease every pain
4/6/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 5:46:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~
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Date: 4/14/2015 5:49:00 PM
so delightful Carrie congrats hugs 7
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Date: 4/14/2015 1:20:00 AM
this fills me up, carrie.. big congrats on your fine award!
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:34:00 PM
A joyful verse I enjoyed very much! Congrad's on your big win! Light & LOve
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Date: 4/13/2015 12:34:00 PM
A fab poem, Carrie. The rhythm and rhyme is just great. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/12/2015 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, This is the first time I've read this poem and while reading it I couldn't help but hear the sound of laughter from my grand-daughter when I make soap bubbles that hang in the air for her to chase
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Date: 4/12/2015 6:14:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your win,well done.
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:48:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, the scene is so vivid in my mind. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:47:00 AM
----How can I forget the sweet sweet way you did this poem, just on the first stanza you already built a connection with me. The way you present this poem is so soft. You presented well how blossoms and bubbles beauty then soothes and entertain.. clever personification that no one else from the other entries used that!!! I love it... :) I find this poem like "my suitor" hehehhe.. :D! YOU ARE MY 4TH! ;) thank you and CONGRATULATIONS!HUGS//olive eloisa
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:44:00 AM
Carrie, this poem is a "blossom, released and set free". Nicely done, congrats on a well deserved placement.
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Date: 4/11/2015 2:03:00 AM
Amazing! All the best!! :D
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:35:00 PM
A beautiful write of hope and freedom Carrie...good luck in the contest...Tim
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Date: 4/6/2015 3:51:00 PM
Oh I do like this one Carrie. I agree with Jan, that it should do well. You've embraced the happy tone of the subjects and threaded through the write. Good Luck in the contest! ~Janet
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Date: 4/6/2015 3:17:00 PM
Simply wonderful imagery Carrie - good luck in the contest - this will fly high:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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