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Blossoms and Bubbles

As I entered the garden the scents enticed rampant rose blossom the arches fenced. Cascading aromatic blossoms greeting me amidst the climbers were the sweet pea. In the centre stood the patio so glamorous sparkling bubbles of champagne so amorous. Tickling the throat buds saturated with scent from the tumbling blossoms as they descent. Blood stream and breath full of roiling bubbles and past swish the gentry parading in couples. Raise your glasses in a toast as friends are wed laughing, knowing they will all too soon be in bed. Ah what a perfect day in this romantic garden bubbles and blossoms tumbling as skies darken Blossoms and bubbles never somniferous mixed together they are becoming toxiferous. written 03/25/2015 contest Blossom and Bubbles

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 5:49:00 PM

Shadow, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/14/2015 1:52:00 AM

your garden blooms, shadow..fascinating work!... kudos to you on your fine win!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 4:55:00 PM

ty Nette hugs

Noel Villarosa

Date: 4/13/2015 3:11:00 AM

Scent triggers blossoming. Always exciting to witness life cycle. Congrats on your winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 4:55:00 PM

ty Noel hugs

Edward Ebbs

Date: 4/12/2015 9:48:00 PM

I love the smell of sweet peas, congrats!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 4:56:00 PM

me too Ed ty hugs

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/12/2015 7:26:00 PM

Hi Shadow, stopping back to say congratulations on your win for this lovely blossom and bubbles poem! Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 4:56:00 PM

ty Sandra hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 4/12/2015 6:23:00 PM

simply beautiful Shadow - i have loved the imagery in the winning poems:-) hugs jan xx

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 4:57:00 PM

ty Jan hugs

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 4/12/2015 4:35:00 PM

congratulations Shadow on this fine winning write,well done.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 4:58:00 PM

ty Robert hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2015 4:33:00 PM

Big congratulations on your win, Shadow. Very nicely rhymed, I may add!!! Hope you are feeling well these days!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 4:58:00 PM

up and down Andrea ty so much hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 4/12/2015 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on this beautiful write, very vivid in my mind a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 4:59:00 PM

ty so much Eve hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/12/2015 1:26:00 PM

Yes, too much of a good thing can become toxiferous..Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I appreciate you reading and finding it worthy..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:00:00 PM

lovely poem Sara ty dear friend hugs

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/12/2015 10:16:00 AM

We were just celebrating the wedding of dear friends, .......so I may still have a bubble or two streaming through my own veins !! Thank you for taking me back for a moment !! And a big thank you for my placement, Shadow, in your Wolf contest! What wonderful entries you have received!! Love this poem !!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:09:00 PM

glad you enjoyed it Carrie ty hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/12/2015 10:09:00 AM

Shadow, Just the lovely imagery of blossoms on the first set, then you bring it on to drink with the bubbles.. that's a nice shift!!!my congratulations!!//olive eloisa

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:10:00 PM

ty Olive hugs

Joseph May

Date: 4/12/2015 9:12:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Shadow

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:10:00 PM

ty Joseph hugs

Constance La France

Date: 4/12/2015 8:38:00 AM

Shadow, you have penned some beautiful couplets for the contest, 7, best of luck and I want to thank you for my wonderful placement in your Canus Lupus Contest, I am very honoured

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:11:00 PM

ty Connie hugs

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/30/2015 11:05:00 AM

bursting with beauty your pen dear pal wishing you a lovely week

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:12:00 PM

ty Liam hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/29/2015 5:14:00 PM

This is beautiful Shadow...

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:13:00 PM

ty Harry hugs

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/28/2015 4:40:00 PM

Great poem, Shadow. You surely mixed the blossom and bubbles up very well in your delightful poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:13:00 PM

ty Sandra hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 3/28/2015 7:14:00 AM

love this - and some very impressive words there too x

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:14:00 PM

ty Jack hugs

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/27/2015 6:55:00 AM

Lovely, playful write, Shadow. I love the different take you made from the usual imagery of the theme. Blessings for Olive's contest! Kim :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 5:14:00 PM

ty Kim hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2015 8:54:00 PM

This is truly delightful and heart warming. I know I'm a guy but I still love weddings.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/27/2015 3:53:00 AM

you are a big softie Rick ty hugs

James Horn

Date: 3/26/2015 8:21:00 PM

The skies did darken for those poor victims of the German air crash. How sad. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/soon_to_be_poem_of_the_day_657237 If you get a chance, read my poem regarding it and comment on it. Thanks. Jim Horn

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/27/2015 3:52:00 AM

ty James will take a look hugs