Shadow Hamilton Poet Couplet

Blossoms and Bubbles

As I entered the garden the scents enticed
rampant rose blossom the arches fenced.

Cascading aromatic blossoms greeting me
amidst the climbers were the sweet pea.

In the centre stood the patio so glamorous
sparkling bubbles of champagne  so amorous.

Tickling the throat buds saturated with scent
from the tumbling blossoms as they descent.

Blood stream and breath full of roiling bubbles
and past swish the gentry parading in couples.

Raise your glasses in a toast as friends are wed
laughing, knowing they will all too soon be in bed.

Ah what a perfect day in this romantic garden
bubbles and blossoms tumbling as skies darken

Blossoms and bubbles never somniferous
mixed together they are becoming toxiferous.

written 03/25/2015

contest Blossom and Bubbles

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 5:49 PM Shadow, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~

Nette Onclaud April 14, 2015 at 1:52 AM your garden blooms, shadow..fascinating work!... kudos to you on your fine win! Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 4:55 PM ty Nette hugs

Noel Villarosa April 13, 2015 at 3:11 AM Scent triggers blossoming. Always exciting to witness life cycle. Congrats on your winning this contest. (^_^) Noel. Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 4:55 PM ty Noel hugs

Edward Ebbs April 12, 2015 at 9:48 PM I love the smell of sweet peas, congrats! Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 4:56 PM me too Ed ty hugs

Sandra Haight April 12, 2015 at 7:26 PM Hi Shadow, stopping back to say congratulations on your win for this lovely blossom and bubbles poem! Hugs, Sandra Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 4:56 PM ty Sandra hugs

Jan Allison April 12, 2015 at 6:23 PM simply beautiful Shadow - i have loved the imagery in the winning poems:-) hugs jan xx Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 4:57 PM ty Jan hugs

Robert Stoner Jr April 12, 2015 at 4:35 PM congratulations Shadow on this fine winning write,well done. Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 4:58 PM ty Robert hugs

Andrea Dietrich April 12, 2015 at 4:33 PM Big congratulations on your win, Shadow. Very nicely rhymed, I may add!!! Hope you are feeling well these days! Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 4:58 PM up and down Andrea ty so much hugs

Eve Roper April 12, 2015 at 3:09 PM Congratulations on this beautiful write, very vivid in my mind a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 4:59 PM ty so much Eve hugs

Sara Kendrick April 12, 2015 at 1:26 PM Yes, too much of a good thing can become toxiferous..Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I appreciate you reading and finding it worthy..Sara Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:00 PM lovely poem Sara ty dear friend hugs

Carrie Richards April 12, 2015 at 10:16 AM We were just celebrating the wedding of dear friends, .......so I may still have a bubble or two streaming through my own veins !! Thank you for taking me back for a moment !! And a big thank you for my placement, Shadow, in your Wolf contest! What wonderful entries you have received!! Love this poem !! Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:09 PM glad you enjoyed it Carrie ty hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 12, 2015 at 10:09 AM Shadow, Just the lovely imagery of blossoms on the first set, then you bring it on to drink with the bubbles.. that's a nice shift!!!my congratulations!!//olive eloisa Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:10 PM ty Olive hugs

Joseph May April 12, 2015 at 9:12 AM Congrats on a fine win Shadow Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:10 PM ty Joseph hugs

Constance La France April 12, 2015 at 8:38 AM Shadow, you have penned some beautiful couplets for the contest, 7, best of luck and I want to thank you for my wonderful placement in your Canus Lupus Contest, I am very honoured Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:11 PM ty Connie hugs

Liam Mcdaid March 30, 2015 at 11:05 AM bursting with beauty your pen dear pal wishing you a lovely week Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:12 PM ty Liam hugs

Harry Horsman March 29, 2015 at 5:14 PM This is beautiful Shadow... Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:13 PM ty Harry hugs

Sandra Haight March 28, 2015 at 4:40 PM Great poem, Shadow. You surely mixed the blossom and bubbles up very well in your delightful poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:13 PM ty Sandra hugs

Jack Horne March 28, 2015 at 7:14 AM love this - and some very impressive words there too x Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:14 PM ty Jack hugs

Kp Nunez March 27, 2015 at 6:55 AM Lovely, playful write, Shadow. I love the different take you made from the usual imagery of the theme. Blessings for Olive's contest! Kim :) Shadow Hamilton April 14, 2015 at 5:14 PM ty Kim hugs

Richard Lamoureux March 26, 2015 at 8:54 PM This is truly delightful and heart warming. I know I'm a guy but I still love weddings. Shadow Hamilton March 27, 2015 at 3:53 AM you are a big softie Rick ty hugs

James Horn March 26, 2015 at 8:21 PM The skies did darken for those poor victims of the German air crash. How sad. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/soon_to_be_poem_of_the_day_657237 If you get a chance, read my poem regarding it and comment on it. Thanks. Jim Horn Shadow Hamilton March 27, 2015 at 3:52 AM ty James will take a look hugs

Emile Pinet March 26, 2015 at 8:34 AM The imagery and shear beauty of your words fill the heart with their message of love and happy thoughts. Emile. Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 6:14 PM ty Emile so pleased you like it hugs

Maurice Yvonne March 25, 2015 at 6:20 PM Love this Shadow, for me this is a fav! Shadow Hamilton March 25, 2015 at 7:21 PM ty so much dear Maurice hugs

Kim Shaw March 25, 2015 at 6:19 PM You have painted such a lavish garden party scene. Gorgeous imagery, Shadow. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Kimberly Shadow Hamilton March 25, 2015 at 7:28 PM ty very much Kimberly hugs

Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2015 at 6:16 PM Are you still doing the long rests for your recovery? Shadow Hamilton March 25, 2015 at 7:25 PM getting better its down to about 9 hours now ty Andrea hugs

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