Blossoms

plethora of hues dancing upon the senses blossoms in tango

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/15/2015 12:41:00 PM

Wow, you tease all of our senses with the "blossoms in tango" in rainbow hues. A vibrant image, Joseph. Congrats on your win! Love, carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2015 10:00:00 PM

I know Debs does not consider personification as Haiku, but personally, I think it is ok if it is so beautifully done as this one is. This was a splendid haiku. Congrats on the winners' list. (Just glanced down and saw that I already said something very similar to you the other day!!)

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/12/2015 2:59:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph! Lovely haiku. Hugs, Kimberly

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2015 12:25:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2015 6:04:00 PM

wow, I LOVE this. If it is for the spring contest, Debs likes very concrete ones for haiku (not using personification), so I am not sure how she would score it, but for me, it's awesome.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/11/2015 1:18:00 AM

What a beautiful haiku Joseph. A visual delight!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2015 3:43:00 PM

Simply beautiful Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2015 2:40:00 PM

Another graceful dance...lovely! :)