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Blossoms Roses blossoms in red like your cheeks, violets are blue, like your opened eyes If the rain makes all things beautiful. Shower me with tiny drops plentiful I sketched your face on the sand it got washed. I wrote your name in air, it was blown The grass and flowers too. If rain makes all things beautiful Why doesn’t it rain on you? then I wrote your name in my heart after that, it became an incurable hurt BY WILLIAMSJI MAVELI www.thefilmmagazine.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/4/2013 10:12:00 PM
From the Anthology of lyrics, both in English & Malayalam ( bilingual, translated by the author) and titled as "Forever, lovingly yours.......", (Pranayapoorm, Ennennum Nintee...) written by Williams George Maveli. ( Williamsji Maveli ) Email: williamsji@yahoo.com
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Date: 1/4/2013 10:10:00 PM
From the Anthology of lyrics, both in English & Malayalam ( bilingual, translated by the author) and titled as "Forever, lovingly yours.......", (Pranayapoorm, Ennennum Nintee...) written by Williams George Maveli. ( Williamsji Maveli ) Email: williamsji@yahoo.com
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Date: 9/13/2012 8:18:00 PM
A lovely poem, Williams! I enjoyed reading it tonight. A belated welcome to the Soup! Hugs, Rhonda
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Williamsji Maveli
Date: 1/4/2013 10:12:00 PM
Thanks, dear. Be a critic for all my poems, if you get time.... Regards williamsj@yahoo.com
Date: 9/6/2012 8:00:00 AM
very nice write
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Date: 9/4/2012 11:19:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2012 5:05:00 AM
Wishing you a lovely new week. A well written poem. - Xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
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Williamsji Maveli
Date: 1/4/2013 10:11:00 PM
THANKS, Anne-Lise. regards Williamsji Maveli

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