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rosebud opens between the petals one raindrop

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/27/2020 5:38:00 AM
Hi Sandra, I guess I have the same thought as a few others here. One raindrop, perfect definement of that phrase. I thoroughly enjoyed this Haiku and great penning. Best of Wishes, William
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Date: 4/20/2016 10:43:00 AM
So exquisitely beautiful - what a surprise - one raindrop! A-7 for this excellent Haiku! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 4/18/2016 2:59:00 PM
A refreshing drink of water is how this affects me. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/10/2013 1:11:00 PM
This is a creative write. Short but full of imagery that makes the reader see a rose blooming in the springtime. Nice job Thanks for the cograts on my Hijinx poem.
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Date: 11/3/2012 7:01:00 AM
Ahhh...very nice!!!
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Date: 10/15/2012 2:51:00 PM
This is precious. I think it's my favorite of your haiku. Well, I can see you have not been here long, so you are not the Sandra I had heard about, but welcome to Soup and keep up with your magic pen!
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Date: 10/14/2012 11:56:00 PM
very nice write Sandra,, I enjoy your great share...thank you <3<3<3 SK
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:12:00 PM
A nice haiku! I have a good, middle line for you. Petals dilate in night wind. You could use 'one teardrop glistens' for the last line. Still, you have written a good haiku, and I complement you on your worthy endeavor.
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Date: 10/14/2012 12:42:00 PM
Like a tear in an eye. Well done!! Big hugs Michael
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Date: 10/14/2012 3:07:00 PM
Hugs, Thank you! :)