Blooms Dh

Miracles in bulbs They bloom in the spring Bulbs placed in autumn Their journey begins Blooms stirring within Winters deep gloom Patient I wait For hue and scent Of spring bouquet Watch with awe Green shoots rise With each glance A bud Bright red Blooms Written 17th January 2019 Contest: Diminished Hexaverse Sponsor: Charles Messina Syllables Per Line: 5 5 5 5 5 0 4 4 4 4 0 3 3 3 0 2 2 0 1 2nd place

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/28/2019 8:47:00 AM

What a charming poem ann, the gardens are already showing spring time colour:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/28/2019 2:05:00 PM

Many thanks Jan, so glad you liked my poem. Yes I have noticed some colour too, but I am waiting for the joyous explosion of colour when spring finally arrives! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 3:32:00 PM

wonderfully done, Ann. Congrats on your win.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/28/2019 1:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea, I do appreciate your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Charles Messina

Date: 1/27/2019 8:43:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Ann. Congratulations on your 2nd place win, great job on this form! Charlie :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/27/2019 11:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie, I enjoyed writing in this form and many thanks for my 2nd placement in your competition. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/17/2019 8:00:00 AM

Very nice! I like this and Spring is my favorite season. Yes, patience. :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/17/2019 8:12:00 AM

Mine too and now my patience is wearing a little thin, haha. Thank you so much Heidi for your lovely comments. My first attempt at a Diminished Hexaverse so I hope Charlie approves... Kindest thoughts Ann xx