Blooms Dh

Miracles in bulbs
They bloom in the spring
Bulbs placed in autumn
Their journey begins
Blooms stirring within

Winters deep gloom
Patient I wait
For hue and scent
Of spring bouquet

Watch with awe
Green shoots rise
With each glance

A bud
Bright red

Blooms

Written 17th January 2019
Contest: Diminished Hexaverse
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Syllables Per Line:	5 5 5 5 5 0 4 4 4 4 0 3 3 3 0 2 2 0 1                    
2nd place
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Allison Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:47 AM
What a charming poem ann, the gardens are already showing spring time colour:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 2:05 PM
Many thanks Jan, so glad you liked my poem. Yes I have noticed some colour too, but I am waiting for the joyous explosion of colour when spring finally arrives! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:32 PM
wonderfully done, Ann. Congrats on your win.
Gilmour Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, I do appreciate your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Messina Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Beautiful poem, Ann. Congratulations on your 2nd place win, great job on this form! Charlie :)
Gilmour Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Thank you so much Charlie, I enjoyed writing in this form and many thanks for my 2nd placement in your competition. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sands Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Very nice! I like this and Spring is my favorite season. Yes, patience. :)
Gilmour Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 8:12 AM
Mine too and now my patience is wearing a little thin, haha. Thank you so much Heidi for your lovely comments. My first attempt at a Diminished Hexaverse so I hope Charlie approves... Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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