Bloomed A Verse

under canopy of star-lit sky waiting for beloved arrive verse flowered from a bud bloomed with unconditional love

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/5/2024 10:50:00 AM

Hello Mala, A beautiful poem. It will be my fav. /Love & Friendship,/ Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/5/2024 11:53:00 AM

Hello Mala, I want to wish you a Merry Christmas & the best for the New Year. You are welcome. I enjoy doing nature poems. I am waiting for my ghost writer to give me an ideda for a Christmas poem. Thank you for this lovely comment. my friend. /Darlene/

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/5/2024 11:01:00 AM

Hi Darlene, Thank you so much. Your "Fave" is a great honour for me. You are a natural poet - whenever i read your poems, I find a powerful voice who enjoys nature from a unique perspective! Poetry comes spontaneously to you, you don't have to try! Love and Friendship, Mala

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/4/2024 12:20:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Bloomed A Verse" write. Few words with much said... Have a wonderful day writing away............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/4/2024 2:53:00 PM

Dear Paula, Thank you. Did you read the other Tanka? I submitted that one for the contest. Which one do you like more? Your opinion is so appreciated! Love ~ Mala