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Bloodsuckers

As so many of you already know, your hard earned money is gone in a flash. That’s what happens at any casino. Those bloodsuckers are just after your cash. An occasional win leaves you aglow. Back to those places, you will make a dash. Once inside, see how fast you lose your dough. It will be the same routine, a rehash.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/9/2012 6:25:00 AM
Agreed, bad thing to do, unless you already have loads of money and enough self control to stop. Nice little poem.
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Date: 2/8/2012 9:16:00 PM
Never gambled, (because I'm not old enough anyway) and possibly never will. I like the topic and the verse as a whole. Quite clever. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/8/2012 8:05:00 PM
This is so very true! That's why I don't visit casinos or ever gamble, because I always lose! I like the advise you give here, though subtle, it's still true you will lose your dough! Awesome Work!!
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