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Eidolon - The Halloween Edition Poetry Contest Sponsored by Suzette Richards 10/10/23

Bloodsucker - Revised

Vampire count Vladimir, his pointy fangs appear

at bare necks for biting, blood he finds exciting!

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Richard Lamoureux

October 12, 2023 at 6:20 AM

Entertaining as always. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison

October 12, 2023 at 11:05 AM

Thanks Rick:-) hugs Jan xx

Jim Slaughter

October 11, 2023 at 10:29 AM

The pic alone should score a very high position in the contest, Jan. BOL, anyway.

Jan Allison

October 11, 2023 at 2:27 PM

lol Jim the sponsor can only see the poem:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

October 11, 2023 at 9:11 AM

nicely done, jan! i give you credit for trying all these forms, especially since i always stick to the tried and true. best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison

October 11, 2023 at 9:35 AM

I love writing humour and rhyme Ilene but thought I would give this one a go, i have only written one before:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

October 11, 2023 at 12:20 AM

Loved this Jan!!

Jan Allison

October 11, 2023 at 2:50 AM

Thanks Art, believe me this 'mean girl' certainly means business and is trying to prove she write 'real' poetry lol lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

October 10, 2023 at 7:51 PM

The original Count! Eat your heart out, Muppets! lol.

Jan Allison

October 11, 2023 at 2:49 AM

thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

October 11, 2023 at 12:19 AM

They did have hearts, unlike some evil in the world.

Jerry Brotherton

October 10, 2023 at 7:20 PM

I must admit, I am unfamiliar with the form, but I am in love with this poem.

Jan Allison

October 11, 2023 at 2:49 AM

it is only the second time I have tried it Jerry:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

October 10, 2023 at 5:16 PM

That's a pretty frightening Alexandrine, Jan.

Jan Allison

October 10, 2023 at 5:22 PM

thanks Lin, i doubt it is what the sponsor is looking for but i take my chance with contests, as long as i am creative that is the main thing:-) hugs Jan xx

Bloodsucker - Revised

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