Bloodstained

"A rose thorn pricked my finger as I laid it on the grave. 
Tears mingled with blood, staining my love's headstone."
                                                                  ~  quote by poet

I often write of tragedies and woes that darken life Those tenebrous times that cause sorrow and strife They bring heartache and grief of their own accord I brandish them with words as if my pen is a sword Ink spots drip with my tears upon parchment pages Bloodstained splotches I pay to life as costly wages My sonnets should tell of love and sweet romance but no one dear to me is left to hold in a dance I often wake in the night from dreams of the past in the hour of gloaming when shadows are cast and feel I'm drowning in a river, caught in a flood where the current flows red, stained from blood I've felt life leaving my body when I wanted to die On bloodstained sheets, my soul prepared to fly From emotional wounds I bled, and I blame villainy, the cruel fate that took my loved ones so dismally. January 30, 2023 Writing Challenge - B Word Contest Sponsored by Constance la France
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La France Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Lin, deep and beautifully penned, love the quote, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Always honored to read your comments on my poetry, Constance. Merci for my placement in your contest.
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February 2, 2023 at 12:31 PM
An excellent sonnet Lin although it’s sad. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Lane Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Thanks so much, Belle.
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Thanks, Sara.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/story/quote. Love It. Have a blessed day..........
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Thanks a lot, Paula.
Miller Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 2:32 AM
I agree with Jo; dark and moving, congratulations
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Thanks, Terry.
Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:10 AM
Dark and moving, Lin:)
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Thank you, Jo.
Cunningham Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 1:32 PM
Quite a dark verse Lin, Poe like even. Good luck in the contest, hope you're having a good day. Tom
Lane Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 2:22 PM
My days have been wonderfully full lately, Tom. I’ve had news of a granddaughter to arrive in July. I love Poeish poetry, so thank you.
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