Bloodrose

she's got me twisted...running with rage like the devils enlisted
fallen angels missed it as she broke away from their supernatural chain gang
poisonous lover bringing pounds of pain
dark beauty leaving this beast deranged
how it started? i just don't know
as i burn with desire...left low while gettin higher...
she's my bloodrose wrapped in barbwire

chorus 1x-i rise to heaven then i fall to hell
striving and surviving...still a slave to her spells
running like a rabbit...she stalks like a beast
i'm sinking in sin and drowning in desire...
she's my bloodrose wrapped in barbwire

she's got me tangled...just like a monster leaving me mutilated and mangled
soft and strong hands stay on the handle
she lights loves candle with a blow torch...i get scarred and scorched
she pops like a pistol coming out of a birthday cake
dying and decayed now resurrected and risen
she dangles the keys that free me from this prison
we meet on the sweet shores of sin like 2 flames of fire...
she's my bloodrose wrapped in barbwire

chorus 1x

she's got me torn...like a sadistic slavemaster sittin in her seat of scorn
with steely whips,eyes of evil,and long black lashes...she slices and slashes
murdering the masses with a smile on her lips
i get doomed and defeated going on dream rides and death trips
i slide and i slip...now i'm falling 4ever...
she's my bloodrose wrapped in barbwire

chorus 1x end

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Date: 12/26/2010 2:17:00 PM
LOL,, yes I will Anthony,,, and how was you x- mass of fun... mine was to dramatic.. How I wish I had a slave master.. I want to be under a spell again... Well being a blood rose for one is never fun at the end,,, enjoyed this poem again,..p.d.
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Date: 11/7/2010 5:47:00 PM
I love it and you know it. The beging was way to fast and had me going. Enjoyed your poem*Luv~SKAT
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Date: 11/5/2010 3:33:00 AM
I like to write horror but this one ratlles my nerves. Excellent piece my friend.
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:42:00 PM
Scary scene! Could feel the terror. Well done.
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Date: 10/30/2010 3:20:00 PM
Reads like one bad momma...Got a chuckle..Sara
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