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Bloodmoon

My first attempt at Tanka - blood moon hanging high casting its eerie shadows streetlights dim my view my hands raise to hide them we blush together

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/14/2015 4:43:00 AM
- I like the blush, wonderful described Bill - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/13/2015 11:06:00 PM
I am not a tanka kind of guy but I like it! Looks like a 7 to me.
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Date: 10/13/2015 8:48:00 PM
I quite like this one!! A good first attempt at tanka. If you ever try to publish one, don't use capitalized first lines. they hate when you do that in the journals.
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 10/14/2015 4:12:00 AM
Thanks for the tip, Andrea! Blessyer x

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