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Blood Red Moon

In moonlight, where all lovers kiss Beware the spell that charms a fool For crimson red will vex the eyes A capricious stain will startle eyes A trick to tempt crossed lover's kiss Bewitching every star-struck fool If you choose to be the fool Beguiled by moon, who winks an eye Be wary of the moonlight kiss A kiss will fool a blind man's eye, when stars conspire with the moon
___________________________ Form -- Tritina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 5/10/2014 1:37:00 PM
Dear Carrie, Always written like a pro! There is a line from "Romeo and Juliet" where Juliet tells Romeo not to compare their love to the "inconstant moon." Romance 'neath the moon does not always remain when "stars conspire with the moon." Excellent work! Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2014 1:12:00 PM
sweet passion from your quill so deserving of the top win, carrie... congrats with huggs!
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:32:00 AM
fantastic pen Carrie congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:56:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, carrie
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:53:00 AM
Carrie, I read your poem several days ago and marveled. Such lovely lines. I thought, I have no chance against this one, and I was right. Heartfelt congratulations on top spot.
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Date: 5/6/2014 10:36:00 PM
Wonderful write ,, a different take makes it unique,, congrats Carrie a great win !
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Date: 5/6/2014 9:13:00 PM
I really like this form, Carrie. You did a great job. I may try this one. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/6/2014 8:40:00 PM
Ah...the spell of the crimson moon...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:18:00 PM
Very nice and quite beautiful Carrie... Verlena
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on being the first in Dave's contest! Verlena
Date: 5/6/2014 7:16:00 PM
Well done. Congrats on first :)
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:08:00 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/6/2014 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning Sestina. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/6/2014 5:43:00 PM
This is beautiful, Carrie! congrats on your merited win. // paul
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Date: 4/27/2014 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful, Carrie. No wonder you're Drake's favorite poet. You sparkle. Thanks for encouraging me today...I'm down. Needed it. hugs
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Date: 4/26/2014 2:18:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..The Blood Moon lunar eclipse was not seen here because it was solid cloudy..Great job with this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2014 9:58:00 AM
Lovely take on the red moon, quite unique,carrie
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