Blood Red Mind

Cursed Madness and Blood Red Mind 
Mine to carry Mine to Mind
Careful now you just don't know
they Dare to Tread Another Blow
This Quiet Violence never ends
it waits for me my Silent Friend
It makes me Strong... it makes me Wrong
it puts an end to my Heart's Song
Just One Memory, just one more
Unlocks the Horrors and Picks the Sore
They never hear my Screaming Mind
Haunting me from Deep Inside
I feel the Storm Rush through my Veins
Blowing in Forgotten Pain
as Blood runs thick behind my Eyes
this Mask of Silence my Disguise
These only Words Save me Tonight
so Desperate now I Frantic Write
And Time Again I must Beware
the Trembling Stillness of Blood Red Stare
and Stronger still my Focus Fixed
my One Laid Burden is of this...
Cursed Madness and Blood Red Mind
Mine to Carry... Mine to Mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/6/2016 11:52:00 PM
An emotive piece very effectively expressed. You drew me into the darkness. Bravo!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 10/10/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thanks so much for the great comments...glad you enjoyed my scary side!
Date: 10/4/2016 2:57:00 PM
Chris, I don't think I have this darker side, though I enjoy reading and writing dark things from time to time. WEll done!! And I sure hope you are only exaggerating. keep on loving DOVE chocolates.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 10/6/2016 2:34:00 PM
Well we do take creative liberty with poetry, but lets just say my memories are dangerous to my sanity...so glad I have my writing to vent it out...and Dove chocolate!:)
Date: 6/29/2016 11:28:00 PM
DArk and passionate writing, Chris. you were in the mood of Poe!!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 7/1/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...I can be an emotional poet...guess there is some womanhood in me!
Date: 4/2/2016 10:01:00 PM
Nice write. Had darker times too.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 7/1/2016 6:42:00 PM
Thanks Tom...hope times are brighter now:)
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