Blood

Fumes of valor, Sins weighing all the hopes lost, Demeanor of power, craving for success whatever's the cost, Deftness of a prodigy, It carries it all, It carries everything you believe it does, It carries nothing! Judged, divided, shamed upon, It just gushes unaware of any anomalies. Its expeditious flow defines us all, The sudden spout through the veins, A constant reminder of human transience. Often sworn to promises which are never kept, It's limitless power put to a constant test. Wasted in this worldly chaos, celebrated by a victory, A mere symbol it remains, Taken for granted, Life's elixir unglorified.
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Agustin Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 1:47 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Staton Avatar
February 23, 2019 at 1:50 AM
Nicely written!
Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Well penned, Utkarsh.
Bangalee Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 10:32 PM
beautifully written- Judged, divided, shamed upon, It just gushes unaware of any anomalies// its brilliant, love it
Ashley Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Your poem is captivating in its deep, meaningful and beautiful expression, Utkarsh. I enjoyed the artistry, purpose and power of your eloquent piece. A fav! Welcome to PoetrySoup! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Thought evoking, Utkarsh. We are all human. Inside of us the same color of life flows through our veins. Peace be with you, Berteena
Krutsinger Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 4:28 AM
Itkarsh, welcome to Poetry Soup! "Craving for success whatever's the cost....life's elixir unglorified." Oh, yes, you are correct in all ways in the form of a well-written poem!
Gupta Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 4:30 PM
Thanks
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