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Fumes of valor, Sins weighing all the hopes lost, Demeanor of power, craving for success whatever's the cost, Deftness of a prodigy, It carries it all, It carries everything you believe it does, It carries nothing! Judged, divided, shamed upon, It just gushes unaware of any anomalies. Its expeditious flow defines us all, The sudden spout through the veins, A constant reminder of human transience. Often sworn to promises which are never kept, It's limitless power put to a constant test. Wasted in this worldly chaos, celebrated by a victory, A mere symbol it remains, Taken for granted, Life's elixir unglorified.

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Date: 2/23/2019 1:50:00 AM
Nicely written!
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Date: 2/18/2019 8:00:00 AM
Well penned, Utkarsh.
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Date: 2/6/2019 10:32:00 PM
beautifully written- Judged, divided, shamed upon, It just gushes unaware of any anomalies// its brilliant, love it
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Date: 2/6/2019 8:26:00 AM
Your poem is captivating in its deep, meaningful and beautiful expression, Utkarsh. I enjoyed the artistry, purpose and power of your eloquent piece. A fav! Welcome to PoetrySoup! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/3/2019 9:11:00 AM
Thought evoking, Utkarsh. We are all human. Inside of us the same color of life flows through our veins. Peace be with you, Berteena
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Date: 1/29/2019 4:28:00 AM
Itkarsh, welcome to Poetry Soup! "Craving for success whatever's the's elixir unglorified." Oh, yes, you are correct in all ways in the form of a well-written poem!
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Utkarsh Gupta
Date: 1/29/2019 4:30:00 PM