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Block Head

“Gimmie another poem, make it a double!” 
Quote from John Lawless 



Block Head

John asked for a poem.
He said make it a double
I took out my pen
and knew I was in trouble

Words wouldn’t come easy
I couldn’t make them flow
Lacking articulation
My thoughts far too slow

I grasped at my corners
The pointy parts of my head
I thought about talented writers
and all the poems I have read

I could write a sonnet
or perhaps a haiku
So many forms to choose from
Whatever shall I do

Why not be silly
Some might get the joke
Maybe I’m sorta special
just like other folk

So give me a verse
I’ll mix it with my own
When drinking words
you shouldn’t drink alone

Although I like quiet
my heads a hectic place
I want to insert lines
into every blank space

Wordaholics are frantic
We need our next hit
Wild wacky or stoic 
We love every bit!

So drink as you will
Feed that addiction
But be very careful 
to choose the right diction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Manassian Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Thanks for satisfying my addiction tonight. Genius write.
Jones Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 5:08 PM
hey Richard...Donna Jones here...very long time!!! just logged on for the first time in years... this made me smile...I relate to much of it...really enjoyed it...maybe I will see you around some soon...hope all is well with you
Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Hi Donna, I’m not here much myself. Thanks for the visit. I hope you are well.
Radice Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 10:53 PM
I raise my pen to you Richard. Cheers! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:55 AM
Thanks Gary.
Macfarlane Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 8:00 PM
Love this Richard, so many delighted lines. Made me laugh. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:56 AM
Hi Cecelia, thanks for the visit.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 12:11 PM
6th verse my favorite, but its all good fun!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 15, 2025 at 12:57 AM
Thanks Kim.
Canerdy Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 8:31 PM
Richard, I enjoyed your clever, entertaining poem about the challenges of writing a poem! :-) Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 7:01 AM
Thanks Janice.
Kauffman Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Just love this wonderful, yet very wise, whimsy, Richard! So many delightful lines -"maybe I'm sorta special, just like other folks," "when drinking words you shouldn't drink alone!" So good to see your postings again! Sending you all the blessings of health and happiness for 2025 - and wishes for more poems!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Blessings to you as well Sam. Thanks for the visit.
Greenhough Avatar
January 8, 2025 at 8:03 PM
I have to agree, diction is a crowning touch. I'm glad that you enjoy writing.
Vaso Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 1:06 AM
I laughed! Happy New year!
Lawless Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 10:22 AM
just remember "the words all look better after closing time".....nice write Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 11:10 PM
Thanks John.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 9:52 AM
First of all, congratulations on your POTD. I am sure you find it easy to write a poem. Personally, I find it hard, especially where rhyme is concerned. Happy New Year.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 7:34 AM
Happy New Year Victor. Thanks fo your visit.
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