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“Gimmie another poem, make it a double!” Quote from John Lawless Block Head John asked for a poem. He said make it a double I took out my pen and knew I was in trouble Words wouldn’t come easy I couldn’t make them flow Lacking articulation My thoughts far too slow I grasped at my corners The pointy parts of my head I thought about talented writers and all the poems I have read I could write a sonnet or perhaps a haiku So many forms to choose from Whatever shall I do Why not be silly Some might get the joke Maybe I’m sorta special just like other folk So give me a verse I’ll mix it with my own When drinking words you shouldn’t drink alone Although I like quiet my heads a hectic place I want to insert lines into every blank space Wordaholics are frantic We need our next hit Wild wacky or stoic We love every bit! So drink as you will Feed that addiction But be very careful to choose the right diction.

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Date: 4/5/2025 9:21:00 AM
Thanks for satisfying my addiction tonight. Genius write.
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Date: 2/5/2025 5:08:00 PM
hey Richard...Donna Jones here...very long time!!! just logged on for the first time in years... this made me smile...I relate to much of it...really enjoyed it...maybe I will see you around some soon...hope all is well with you
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2025 6:18:00 AM
Hi Donna, I’m not here much myself. Thanks for the visit. I hope you are well.
Date: 1/14/2025 10:53:00 PM
I raise my pen to you Richard. Cheers! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2025 12:55:00 AM
Thanks Gary.
Date: 1/14/2025 8:00:00 PM
Love this Richard, so many delighted lines. Made me laugh. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2025 12:56:00 AM
Hi Cecelia, thanks for the visit.
Date: 1/12/2025 12:11:00 PM
6th verse my favorite, but its all good fun!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2025 12:57:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 1/10/2025 8:31:00 PM
Richard, I enjoyed your clever, entertaining poem about the challenges of writing a poem! :-) Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/11/2025 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Janice.
Date: 1/9/2025 10:06:00 AM
Just love this wonderful, yet very wise, whimsy, Richard! So many delightful lines -"maybe I'm sorta special, just like other folks," "when drinking words you shouldn't drink alone!" So good to see your postings again! Sending you all the blessings of health and happiness for 2025 - and wishes for more poems!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2025 11:28:00 AM
Blessings to you as well Sam. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 1/8/2025 8:03:00 PM
I have to agree, diction is a crowning touch. I'm glad that you enjoy writing.
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Date: 1/7/2025 1:06:00 AM
I laughed! Happy New year!
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:22:00 AM
just remember "the words all look better after closing time".....nice write Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2025 11:10:00 PM
Thanks John.
Date: 12/31/2024 9:52:00 AM
First of all, congratulations on your POTD. I am sure you find it easy to write a poem. Personally, I find it hard, especially where rhyme is concerned. Happy New Year.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2025 7:34:00 AM
Happy New Year Victor. Thanks fo your visit.
Date: 12/31/2024 8:13:00 AM
A perfect companion piece for your potd poem, with a wry twist ala Mr. Lawless. Keep em comin Rick
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2025 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Tom. A new Year begins.

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