Block Head

“Gimmie another poem, make it a double!” 
Quote from John Lawless 



Block Head

John asked for a poem.
He said make it a double
I took out my pen
and knew I was in trouble

Words wouldn’t come easy
I couldn’t make them flow
Lacking articulation
My thoughts far too slow

I grasped at my corners
The pointy parts of my head
I thought about talented writers
and all the poems I have read

I could write a sonnet
or perhaps a haiku
So many forms to choose from
Whatever shall I do

Why not be silly
Some might get the joke
Maybe I’m sorta special
just like other folk

So give me a verse
I’ll mix it with my own
When drinking words
you shouldn’t drink alone

Although I like quiet
my heads a hectic place
I want to insert lines
into every blank space

Wordaholics are frantic
We need our next hit
Wild wacky or stoic 
We love every bit!

So drink as you will
Feed that addiction
But be very careful 
to choose the right diction.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/5/2025 9:21:00 AM
Thanks for satisfying my addiction tonight. Genius write.
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Date: 2/5/2025 5:08:00 PM
hey Richard...Donna Jones here...very long time!!! just logged on for the first time in years... this made me smile...I relate to much of it...really enjoyed it...maybe I will see you around some soon...hope all is well with you
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2025 6:18:00 AM
Hi Donna, I’m not here much myself. Thanks for the visit. I hope you are well.
Date: 1/14/2025 10:53:00 PM
I raise my pen to you Richard. Cheers! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2025 12:55:00 AM
Thanks Gary.
Date: 1/14/2025 8:00:00 PM
Love this Richard, so many delighted lines. Made me laugh. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2025 12:56:00 AM
Hi Cecelia, thanks for the visit.
Date: 1/12/2025 12:11:00 PM
6th verse my favorite, but its all good fun!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2025 12:57:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 1/10/2025 8:31:00 PM
Richard, I enjoyed your clever, entertaining poem about the challenges of writing a poem! :-) Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/11/2025 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Janice.
Date: 1/9/2025 10:06:00 AM
Just love this wonderful, yet very wise, whimsy, Richard! So many delightful lines -"maybe I'm sorta special, just like other folks," "when drinking words you shouldn't drink alone!" So good to see your postings again! Sending you all the blessings of health and happiness for 2025 - and wishes for more poems!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2025 11:28:00 AM
Blessings to you as well Sam. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 1/8/2025 8:03:00 PM
I have to agree, diction is a crowning touch. I'm glad that you enjoy writing.
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Date: 1/7/2025 1:06:00 AM
I laughed! Happy New year!
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Date: 1/1/2025 10:22:00 AM
just remember "the words all look better after closing time".....nice write Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2025 11:10:00 PM
Thanks John.
Date: 12/31/2024 9:52:00 AM
First of all, congratulations on your POTD. I am sure you find it easy to write a poem. Personally, I find it hard, especially where rhyme is concerned. Happy New Year.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2025 7:34:00 AM
Happy New Year Victor. Thanks fo your visit.
Date: 12/31/2024 8:13:00 AM
A perfect companion piece for your potd poem, with a wry twist ala Mr. Lawless. Keep em comin Rick
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2025 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Tom. A new Year begins.
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