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Blizzard Reconsidered Tb

One Snowflake falls Then follows all Drifts blow and grow Wallowing kids Tomorrow skids Next day a tow Borrow warm hat Sore elbows drat Ice skating woes Bauk Than - Than Bauk Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina 06/12/20 extended version with rhyme

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/17/2021 5:10:00 AM

You follow the flakes from start to pain! Congratulations!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/17/2021 5:29:00 AM

Heya Kim, thank you so much, I’m delighted to get on the list, it’s a fantastic form of poetry, got great enjoyment writing this one, cheers David

Charles Messina

Date: 2/15/2021 9:29:00 PM

Well done, David. Congrats on your win!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 11:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Charles, I’m delighted to have made the cut in your contest, I enjoyed this form of poetry, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/10/2020 5:54:00 PM

Fun when we draw out the verse!

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/10/2020 8:05:00 PM

Hit a few blind alleys, along the way Kim, still your right was fun, cheers David

John Watt

Date: 12/9/2020 3:31:00 PM

David, I liked all the 'ow' rhymes you came up with, and how you lined them up in a column. You also told a nice wintry story with this challenging form. Well done, best wishes ~ John

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/9/2020 10:53:00 PM

Thank you John, I thought lining them up, make the syllable rhyme and position easier to measure, I just about made the final line was feeling the heat in the cold, cheers David