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Blizzard Reconsidered Tb

One Snowflake falls
                   Then follows all
      Drifts blow and grow
                          Wallowing kids
                      Tomorrow skids
               Next day a tow
                           Borrow warm hat
                      Sore elbows drat
                   Ice skating woes


Bauk Than - Than Bauk Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina 
06/12/20 extended version with rhyme

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2020

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/17/2021 5:10:00 AM You follow the flakes from start to pain! Congratulations! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 2/17/2021 5:29:00 AM Heya Kim, thank you so much, I’m delighted to get on the list, it’s a fantastic form of poetry, got great enjoyment writing this one, cheers David

Charles Messina Date: 2/15/2021 9:29:00 PM Well done, David. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 2/15/2021 11:38:00 PM Thank you so much Charles, I’m delighted to have made the cut in your contest, I enjoyed this form of poetry, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/10/2020 5:54:00 PM Fun when we draw out the verse! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/10/2020 8:05:00 PM Hit a few blind alleys, along the way Kim, still your right was fun, cheers David

John Watt Date: 12/9/2020 3:31:00 PM David, I liked all the 'ow' rhymes you came up with, and how you lined them up in a column. You also told a nice wintry story with this challenging form. Well done, best wishes ~ John Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 12/9/2020 10:53:00 PM Thank you John, I thought lining them up, make the syllable rhyme and position easier to measure, I just about made the final line was feeling the heat in the cold, cheers David