Blissful Repose

Upon humankind pleasant things The Creator did impose.
Among these the inalienable right to undisturbed repose!
Whether slumbering upon a royal palace bed or a cottage cot,
Either provides blissful snoozing, it really matters not!

I pray the Good Lord will not hold unto me a grudge,
Should I reach that Golden Gate, my faults for Him to judge,
For stealing naps in those hallowed, hard chapel pews,
As the preacher expounded upon his platitudinous views!

Even sleeping on an army cot with its mattress so very thin,
Sleep came easily despite the overpowering din.
Blissfully dreaming until "Reveille" jerked me up alert,
To the sergeant's bellowing - his authority to exert!

I've cat-napped through many a long and wearisome concert,
My spouse poking me with her elbow trying to keep me alert.
Despite her constant prodding and ardent imploring,
She says I really embarrass her with my fitful snoring!

Even in an airplane flying at thirty-thousand feet,
I manage a few winks despite the din - now that's quite a feat!
I suppose many misguided souls find solace in their booze,
But for me - there's nothing like a peaceful, blissful snooze!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
(© All Rights Reserved)

Placed No. 9 in "Your Snooze, You Choose" Contest - June 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/27/2010 1:20:00 PM
You've chosen the right way. No booze, just snooze. Great poem and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:56:00 PM
Right ON!! congratulations with this doozy of a poem on the snoozy. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations Robert on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Your Snooze, You Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:14:00 AM
Hi Bob H :)! I'm sure that God won't be holding grudges against you ;) really enjoyed this write of yours and all those scenarios in which you have these "blissful repose"--me too I could sleep anywhere haha! Congrats on being in my winners' list!! --nikko :)
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Date: 3/25/2010 2:13:00 PM
Naps are great and can happen no matter what's going on. I've proved that several times!
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:25:00 PM
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:56:00 AM
You sound like a gentelman with alot of poetry art. Not advancedpoems , but very talented.
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