Bliss Renewal Continual

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As heart does wish, so it is, getting to endless bliss fizz, if we choose, without excuse, making love our only muse. Vibration variety partaken in piety, anchored not at any point, that bliss of heart, we anoint. We are spirit, we are light! Boundless is our soul’s delight! Each life breath, divine wonder! Hark within, soundless thunder! 29-March-2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/29/2022 8:29:00 AM

Jueju is a new form to me, but you have exhibited it well my friend. The rhyme and flow are excellent, and I especially like the last line, "Hark within, soundless thunder!" Have a blissful day, Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 3/29/2022 9:29:00 AM

This form is new to me too. I used it for the first time in Constance’s contest. I’m kind of drawn to it, being a compact 7 syllable per line format.