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Bliss

You are the epitome, of all women, The unconditional love that your givin, My days and nights, there's a continuous wish That you remain in my heart, that would be "Bliss" Thou art the air in my lung's,the taste on my tounge,You are simply the best, The epitome of all the rest, The complete and uncontested, love That I have, every last dream together, We did grab,So I ask thee, to be gentle, don't Be so harsh,my soul, all my wrongs, did you wash In closing, you are my everything Possibly the one who makes the birds sing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/5/2009 10:43:00 AM
I haven't read your poems before and decided to start with bliss,,,always a nice place to begin. How beautifully written, so much love and adoration Jamesiana.
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Date: 2/21/2009 11:05:00 AM
Jamesiana, this is a wonderful description of true love. I wish everyone could find "the one who makes the birds sing." I'm so glad you are happy in love; many poets long to find that special someone. Love, Carolyn
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