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Blinded By Right and Wrong

I stood on a hill and screamed for peace... Lost in the noise were friends that teased... A mask that hides what's wrong and right... Too many stones thrown that blinded my sight... Wolves that prowled with a sheeps face and a devils soul... Crept slowly in the dark where the truth was never told... My cape is wrinkled and torn and bloodied from the day... A battle well fought where being right lost its way... Then left with a heart with blood still there to drain... No need to ask the question, I'd do it all over again... I don't write stories, I don't write make believe... I write what's in Me.... Michael

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/22/2012 5:59:00 PM

And when you write what is in you, never apologize. It is your truth.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/22/2012 4:11:00 PM

Michael, this is the best Polaroid picture of U here on the soup. Never has there been a picture perfect poem on the soup, well described like this 1. Everything inside U is unique. A diamond glowing bright in its own mine. Sometimes the more life shows U it's true colors. U got 2 yell louder and listen to only U. If U can't find the peace it will find U through all the veils we dismiss. Love peace & happiness. Is what we aim for. Sadly we fall from it trying to do the righteous things always~pd

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 8/22/2012 4:26:00 PM

Thank You PD, your words above lighten all that is good in me....

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/22/2012 8:40:00 AM

ah,,,,wonderful...:) nice share and thanks Michael:) SK

Tracy Edwards

Date: 8/22/2012 6:20:00 AM

You can only be true to yourself in this life Michael and stick up for your own ethics and morals.. Awesome poem xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2012 9:20:00 PM

may I say whats in u is absolutely phenomenal Michael luv.. fantastic expression of truth spilled onto pages to share.. JG is felling so so.. trying to bounce back to ME again..hope to talk Sunday? it ha been crazy here. new bambino arrives next month and we r preparing.. oh..

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/21/2012 7:33:00 PM

Amazing what is in you. You've written a spectacular poem that has touched my heart. -and probably many others. Dark, but very well written. Always, Laura

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/21/2012 6:58:00 PM

Dang Michael...I feel where you are coming from my dear friend...I agree with your last statement.."I write what's in me."..we must never give up the fight no matter what!!!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/21/2012 8:31:00 AM

Powerful Michael, written with passion and sincerity. I like very much

Don Johnson

Date: 8/21/2012 4:48:00 AM

yes we have to let it flow, them words get caught in the undertow, the words of truth , lament...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2012 9:00:00 PM

I'm glad you write what's in you, michael!! it's a good way to live: knowing you would do it all over again.

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/20/2012 5:25:00 PM

My dear friend...I hear whats in you...wish most of us would truly speak whats in us...that would help. A great write here. One love. Joy Wells

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 8/20/2012 5:28:00 PM

Right back at you Joy xxxx

Joy Wellington
Date: 8/20/2012 5:26:00 PM

Thanks for your visit.

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/20/2012 5:01:00 PM

This write that came from you is good.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/20/2012 3:33:00 PM

This is quite the moving write my friend! How truthful you are here within this elaborate piece! You have created a wonderful poem Michael! I believe in what you say, every piece is true! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 8/20/2012 3:30:00 PM

Michael let's hope there is never a need, and there won't need to be over this problem.....Dave

Cory Long

Date: 8/20/2012 3:15:00 PM

I love it and everything it stands for.. You have a way with words buddy.. cory