Blinded By Beauty

so beautiful, she can’t see the world for the mirror

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/15/2018 8:51:00 AM

Too caught up in her own beautiful details to see the notice the beauty in the world around her. Such an intriguing and wonderfully expressed monoku Bernard. Excellent. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/15/2018 7:08:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/13/2018 10:16:00 AM

A clever write! So true for some!

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/13/2018 5:37:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2018 8:44:00 AM

oh so clever Bernard a lovely monoku!:-) hugs jan xx

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/13/2018 9:52:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your visit and lovely comment, Jan! Much appreciated :)