Blinded

he is the flame that draws me in the night
as it flickers in his eyes hypnotizing me
I barely notice him remove his ring
blinded i succumb to his passion
his kisses mesmerize me
sin never felt so good 
our bodies as one
together until
the hour
is up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/14/2017 12:54:00 AM
Hhmmm...following on from the previous poem I feel - All rather intriguing! :) My very best wishes - Cheers! :) john P.s Makes me wonder what you have been getting up too in your spare moments. :)
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Sharon Riggio
Date: 6/25/2020 4:39:00 PM
Gee wiz...thank you for reading my poems. I am with All Poetry now. I do tune in for a few blog radio shows. I find it difficult to understand poems when they are read. For some unknown reason I have been gravitating to the dark poems. Pretty easy to write. I do enter contests and end up with so many poems in construction held in my drafts. Here is a link of one of my recent dark poems. https://allpoetry.com/poem/14919103-Creation-by-SLR8313 check it out sometime bye
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Sharon Riggio
Date: 8/15/2017 12:59:00 PM
thanks for your kind words....have not been doing any writing because too many things are bombarding my mind but will at some point....hope you are well
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Sharon Riggio
Date: 8/15/2017 12:59:00 PM
thanks for your kind words....have not been doing any writing because too many things are bombarding my mind but will at some point....hope you are well
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