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"Blind Spot"
Eyes front on the Road Foot to the floor What you don’t see coming - The Blind Spot. Eyes open foot to the floor. The ‘TIME’ is coming, The Blind Spot - Something unseen, unheard... felt somewhere in the heart ....mmm foot to the floor. Moving, Moving, Always Moving foot to the floor. Forward. Blind spot past - acknowledged. Serendipity - kissed ... and a Stranger's smile - Left... Far Behind. Blind Spot Whispering closer ever closer, Whistling outrageously 'crassly' "Come Here, Come closer," In the mind; Invisible in the ear. (LadyLabyrinth / 2020)
"I'm Shakin'" / Jack White (cover) https://youtu.be/OdQsGp79VpA

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Date: 12/21/2020 8:38:00 AM
A cold bed is regret from love too soon given. Or I could have it all wrong. Either way, I love the subtly and repetition in this poem.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/21/2020 12:40:00 PM
"Death" may be the blind spot. Time is short; Life must be lived to the full, when the facts are seen cold and hard.
Date: 12/5/2020 6:55:00 AM
Leave that blind spot in the past...foot on the gas full speed ahead
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/5/2020 10:57:00 AM
Watch out for the after burn.
Date: 12/4/2020 4:51:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_dilettante_diaries_going_gangsta_on_the_road_to_the_lotus_eaters_at_loon_junction_1059240
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/4/2020 4:51:00 PM
Goin' Gangsta on the Road to the Lotus Eaters at Loon Junction.
Date: 12/4/2020 1:05:00 AM
I LOVE ghost stories. ;). x
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/4/2020 2:50:00 AM
https://youtu.be/ruYd9n008RM
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/4/2020 2:04:00 AM
apparently, Delilah kicked Samson's a**. ref. Book of Judges ;) regards, Lilith. Capital "L", Lilith.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/4/2020 1:23:00 AM
https://www.britannica.com/topic/Lilith-Jewish-folklore ; it's just words, right?

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