Blind Lovers

Though they are both blind,
bodies close tight,lips apart
deep kisses lingered,
They can feel each others breath;
Lost in the world of darkness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 1:42 AM
Very well thought out write on the theme, Olusegun. congrats
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August 28, 2014 at 4:51 PM
Hi Olusegun, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE
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August 28, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Olusegun,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 11:35 AM
wonderful Tanka! many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:10 AM
wow, this is a great poem, Olusequn. You really got right into their skin!!
Song Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 1:58 AM
Hmmm...deep tho'ts...Are they spiritually blind or truly blind?...Very good tanka, Olusegun. :) Gwendolen
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June 14, 2012 at 7:14 PM
OA,,enjoyed..pd
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